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25 y/o filly from the United States that has only recently discovered the wonder that is MLP:FIM.

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In 2185, during his campaign against the Collectors, Commander Shepard discovered a previously unknown species whose origins predated any other race in the modern galaxy. Following a daring rescue from their ancient sanctuary, the Equestrian Herd was brought back into the galaxy where, for the first time in eons, they must walk their own path.

Knowing full well the terrible threat that lingers on the edge of the galaxy, the leader of this newly freed race fights to secure her people’s future while attempting to prepare for the storm on the horizon.

This is her story.


The long awaited Sequel to Mass Effect 2: The Equestrian Equation  This is a reader directed story. Your choices will shape events.

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Also, this series has its own TVTropes page now! (Special thanks to user CrowMagnon for setting it up).

First Published
24th Jan 2013
Last Modified
10th May 2014

Comments ( 2,473 )

#1 · Chapter 1 · 79w, 20h ago · · ·

Hell yes! I've been waiting for this!

Wanderer D
#2 · Chapter 1 · 79w, 20h ago · 6 · ·


#3 · Chapter 1 · 79w, 20h ago · · 9 ·

Well, nvm, almost first:applecry:

But anyway,


“Twilight... are you familiar with the human concept of ‘karma’?” the mech interrupted her, causing the horned equine to lean up from her resting position and give the mech a curious, suspicious look.

“Yes... Why?”

*Accessing Citadel Security Criminal Database*

-Access code required-

*Initiating system bypass*

*Neutralizing safeguards*


*Safeguards neutralized*

*Tracing system root path*

*Decrypting information*


-Welcome back, Captain Bailey-

-Full access granted-

*Inputting new entry in category: Vehicular Violations*

“Registration Number 102938, Recorded Violations:

1638 unpaid parking tickets

758 instances of parking in VIP areas

*Vehicle scheduled for immediate confiscation and auction*”

-Logging out of Citadel Security Criminal Database-

The mech’s luminescent eyes shifted slightly, giving off the appearance of acute amusement as he terminated his connection to the extranet.

“Just curious.”

LOL WUT MOFO!:trollestia:

Comment posted by Professor Plum deleted at 8:00pm on the 24th of January, 2013
#6 · Chapter 1 · 79w, 20h ago · 1 · ·

Just before I read, I must say:



Forty two is now the gloriousest of bastards / karma agents.

L2L is best writer.

And this story is going to be awe-inducingly marvelous.

#7 · Chapter 1 · 79w, 19h ago · · ·


#8 · Chapter 1 · 79w, 19h ago · · ·

:yay: yay

Edit: After reading the first chapter i already can´t wait for the next one and maby our first Choices and/or Directive Decisions ^^ .

#9 · Chapter 1 · 79w, 19h ago · · ·

>>2014546hey:rainbowhuh: don't be like that:ajbemused:

#10 · Chapter 1 · 79w, 19h ago · · ·

Looks interesting.

#11 · Chapter 1 · 79w, 19h ago · · 1 ·


Then don't first post.

And especially don't first post when you're not first

#12 · Chapter 1 · 79w, 19h ago · · ·

I need a squeeface icon. Rainbow Kissy will have to do.


Also, please tell your artist that I love the Dr. Adorable reference with Flutters.

#13 · Chapter 1 · 79w, 19h ago · · ·

Oh, so 42 wrote the Codex?

Brain the size of a planet I assume?

#14 · Chapter 1 · 79w, 19h ago · · ·

I am unbelievably excited to see the continuation of this story. It will be very interesting to see just what you have in stock for our Madam President. While I voted for continuing Shepards tale, this will no doubt be an equally rewarding trip into both the world of Mass Effect and MLP.

I loved the way you made Forty-Two of Fifty think and act as well. Karma indeed.

#15 · Chapter 1 · 79w, 19h ago · 1 · ·

>>2014594 Uncalled for, Plum. :ajbemused: Besides Ninja: according to the site rules, you're not supposed to do 'first' posts anyways without something else to say. Personally I never saw the point but 'eh'. So let's just leave that there, shall we... please Enjoy the story. :ajsmug:

#16 · Chapter 1 · 79w, 19h ago · · 2 ·


#17 · Chapter 1 · 79w, 19h ago · · ·

It's here!  It's finally here! :pinkiehappy:

So, Pinkie's a mad scientist?

Who cares!  Yippee!

*Bzzzzt*  Warning:  Errors detected in source code.  Please rectify:

Under Citadel Conventions, these crimes are immediately upgraded to Capital offenses

Missing period, and there's just way too much capitalization in this box.  What's Up With That?

#18 · Chapter 1 · 79w, 19h ago · · ·


Well, first posting is a bannable offence, so...

Either way, I'm content to let it drop.


That's not Fluttershy, I'm afraid :twilightsmile:

#19 · Chapter 1 · 79w, 19h ago · · ·

>>2014630:pinkiehappy:Oh, but I did have something else to say, so I'm safe:rainbowwild:

>>2014641no, not really. That actually never happens in the real world, but they say that to discourage it.

#20 · Chapter 1 · 79w, 19h ago · · ·

>>2014604 Uhh that's Pinkie Pie. :pinkiesmile: But by all means, let him know yourself. This pic is up in his gallery, just click the 'source' link under the cover page.

#21 · Chapter 1 · 79w, 19h ago · · ·

oh, and as an idea, steal the first batch of comments with the choices listed on each chapter with stuff to vote on, and have people thumbs up their choices. down votes would have no standing on the outcomes, only upvotes.

#22 · Chapter 1 · 79w, 19h ago · · 1 ·

Curse you Twilight fans

Yay! The next installation! From Twilight's perspective.

Oh this will be fun.

I will vote options that either screw somebody over or just are bad in the long run.

#23 · Chapter 1 · 79w, 19h ago · 1 · ·

>>2014657 but... I like the comments. :fluttershysad: I do hope they contain more than just the vote personally, but still, It pleases me to see the readers take their time to vote, even if they are voting in the minority and know so at the time.

#24 · Chapter 1 · 79w, 19h ago · · ·


oh, the coat color under the labcoat looks yellow, and the mane style looks very similar, if a bit shorter than, Flutter's. Anywho, off to go compliment an awesome artist.

#25 · Chapter 1 · 79w, 19h ago · · ·


Alright, was just a suggestion for streamlining. I know some authors don't like cluttered comments sections.

I look forward to this story, and I'm glad I'm actually here as this one is being written, as I read the last one after it was completed (I started reading your stuff around when you started the current Doctor Whooves story)

Anyhow, have a nice day, it made me squee that you responded so quickly.

#26 · Chapter 1 · 79w, 19h ago · · ·

Bad Forty Two! Bad changeling-mech! :rainbowlaugh:

I've been really looking forward to this, it's going to be fantastic.

#27 · Chapter 1 · 79w, 19h ago · · ·

Hmmm, I hate 'ponies fuck yeah' (not that this is 'ponies fuck yeah') and the pony race is in an extremely delicate situation.  You know what this calls for?

EQUESTRIAN EMPIRE!  All shall bow to the pony Overlords!  Mwuahahahaha!  Let's make Twilight future-Hitler!

#28 · Chapter 1 · 79w, 19h ago · · ·

Oh god, this story is finally here. I'd squee so hard right now if sqeeing was something I ever did.

#29 · Chapter 1 · 79w, 19h ago · · ·

Okay, I would like to state that this is better than I expected of this, I will track this:twilightsmile:

#30 · Chapter 1 · 79w, 19h ago · · ·

Oh yes, I am going to enjoy this! And I sincerely hope that 42 manages to get a security-cam view of Sparatus's reaction.....:rainbowlaugh:

#31 · Chapter 1 · 79w, 19h ago · · ·

It begins...

#32 · Chapter 1 · 79w, 19h ago · · ·

So it begins.  Can't to see were this story leads.  The only Idea I can put forth at thus time is that maybe Twilight should think about how long she wants to stay on the Citadel.  It might be prudent for her to develop a power base elsewhere.  I'll be sure to share with you any ideas I come up with.

#33 · Chapter 1 · 79w, 19h ago · · ·

So much squee here. :heart::heart: And I missed out on the chance to do so for Equestrian Equation, but this time I get to take part in the voting! SO AWESOME! :rainbowkiss::yay::rainbowkiss::yay::rainbowkiss:

#34 · Chapter 1 · 79w, 19h ago · 1 · ·


Tell that to EpicDonus.

Oh wait.

You can't.

Because he's banned.

Comment posted by Rainbow Ninja deleted at 8:46pm on the 24th of January, 2013
#36 · Chapter 1 · 79w, 19h ago · · ·


Someone who ran around the site first-posting ":rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss:" on any blog or story he could find.

Comment posted by Rainbow Ninja deleted at 8:46pm on the 24th of January, 2013
#38 · Chapter 1 · 79w, 19h ago · · ·


Same situation, as he was banned for first-posting, something which you claimed didn't happen.

I'm happy to leave this be, just don't earn yourself a ban for being stupid.

Comment posted by Rainbow Ninja deleted at 8:46pm on the 24th of January, 2013
#40 · Chapter 1 · 79w, 18h ago · · ·

My favourite character of the show leading equestrian survivors through space and hardship? I'll definitely follow this. :twilightsmile:

#41 · Chapter 1 · 79w, 18h ago · · ·

Yes! it's back!

#42 · Chapter 1 · 79w, 18h ago · · ·

Ok, I am officially stoked for this story! I really enjoyed the first one. I have one question: have the events of the other ME2 DLC missions taken place yet, like Overload or the Shadow Broker? Just curious. Keep up the great work!

#43 · Chapter 1 · 79w, 18h ago · 1 · ·

In the words of Twilight herself



SO SO SO Hyped for this. I love the first one, and this time I can actually take part in the choices.

I am so loving 42. Paybacks a bitch Councillor. Enjoy it.

#44 · Chapter 1 · 79w, 18h ago · 1 · 1 ·

Manual for this story:

1. Favorite it.

2. Up-vote it.

3. Read it.

4. Comment on it.

5. ...

6. Profit!

#45 · Chapter 1 · 79w, 18h ago · · ·

To move the mouse to the "like button" would cost a percentage of a decimal's worth of a calorie!

#46 · Chapter 1 · 79w, 18h ago · · ·

Awesome can't wait for more and, I thank you for writing this story.

#47 · Chapter 1 · 79w, 18h ago · · ·


According to in-story continuity, Firewalker and Overlord: yes. Shadow Broker and Arrival: not yet. Also this story begins immediately after the "Suicide Mission," for reference.

#48 · Chapter 1 · 79w, 18h ago · · ·

Oh hell yes!


Also, 42 just did what most of us wish we could have throughout the whole trilogy.

#49 · Chapter 1 · 79w, 18h ago · · ·

I REALLY enjoyed ME2: TEE and I'm more than happy to see it's going to continue. :pinkiehappy:

So a fav and a like is most likely the wisest course of choice. :twilightsmile:

#50 · Chapter 1 · 79w, 18h ago · · ·

"I'm Garrus Vakarian and this is now my favourite fic on the Internet."

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