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Loyal2Luna

Joined August 2011
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25 y/o filly from the United States that has only recently discovered the wonder that is MLP:FIM.

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In 2185, during his campaign against the Collectors, Commander Shepard discovered a previously unknown species whose origins predated any other race in the modern galaxy. Following a daring rescue from their ancient sanctuary, the Equestrian Herd was brought back into the galaxy where, for the first time in eons, they must walk their own path.

Knowing full well the terrible threat that lingers on the edge of the galaxy, the leader of this newly freed race fights to secure her people’s future while attempting to prepare for the storm on the horizon.

This is her story.

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The long awaited Sequel to Mass Effect 2: The Equestrian Equation  This is a reader directed story. Your choices will shape events.

If you favorite, also like! It's one little button click that makes all the difference.

Also, this series has its own TVTropes page now! (Special thanks to user CrowMagnon for setting it up).

First Published
24th Jan 2013
Last Modified
1st Sep 2013

Comments ( 1,735 )

#1 · Chapter 1 · 64w, 6d ago · · ·

Hell yes! I've been waiting for this!

#2 · Chapter 1 · 64w, 6d ago · 6 · ·

YES!

#3 · Chapter 1 · 64w, 6d ago · · 6 ·

Well, nvm, almost first:applecry:

But anyway,

SO MUCH WIN! I'VE BEEN WATCHING AND WAITING FOR THIS VERY MOMENT TO ARRIVE! AND IT WAS GLORIOUS!

“Twilight... are you familiar with the human concept of ‘karma’?” the mech interrupted her, causing the horned equine to lean up from her resting position and give the mech a curious, suspicious look.

“Yes... Why?”

*Accessing Citadel Security Criminal Database*

-Access code required-

*Initiating system bypass*

*Neutralizing safeguards*

...

*Safeguards neutralized*

*Tracing system root path*

*Decrypting information*

...

-Welcome back, Captain Bailey-

-Full access granted-

*Inputting new entry in category: Vehicular Violations*

“Registration Number 102938, Recorded Violations:

1638 unpaid parking tickets

758 instances of parking in VIP areas

*Vehicle scheduled for immediate confiscation and auction*”

-Logging out of Citadel Security Criminal Database-

The mech’s luminescent eyes shifted slightly, giving off the appearance of acute amusement as he terminated his connection to the extranet.

“Just curious.”

LOL WUT MOFO!:trollestia:

Comment posted by Professor Plum deleted at 8:00pm on the 24th of January, 2013
#6 · Chapter 1 · 64w, 6d ago · 1 · ·

Just before I read, I must say:

EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEITSHEREITSHEREITSHEREITSHEREAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!

*reads*

Forty two is now the gloriousest of bastards / karma agents.

L2L is best writer.

And this story is going to be awe-inducingly marvelous.

#7 · Chapter 1 · 64w, 6d ago · · ·

OHH LORD PINKIE HAS AN OMNI-TOOL!

#8 · Chapter 1 · 64w, 6d ago · · ·

:yay: yay

Edit: After reading the first chapter i already can´t wait for the next one and maby our first Choices and/or Directive Decisions ^^ .

#9 · Chapter 1 · 64w, 6d ago · · ·

>>2014546hey:rainbowhuh: don't be like that:ajbemused:

#10 · Chapter 1 · 64w, 6d ago · · ·

Looks interesting.

#11 · Chapter 1 · 64w, 6d ago · · 1 ·

>>2014582

Then don't first post.

And especially don't first post when you're not first

#12 · Chapter 1 · 64w, 6d ago · · ·

I need a squeeface icon. Rainbow Kissy will have to do.

:rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss:

Also, please tell your artist that I love the Dr. Adorable reference with Flutters.

#13 · Chapter 1 · 64w, 6d ago · · ·

Oh, so 42 wrote the Codex?

Brain the size of a planet I assume?

#14 · Chapter 1 · 64w, 6d ago · · ·

I am unbelievably excited to see the continuation of this story. It will be very interesting to see just what you have in stock for our Madam President. While I voted for continuing Shepards tale, this will no doubt be an equally rewarding trip into both the world of Mass Effect and MLP.

I loved the way you made Forty-Two of Fifty think and act as well. Karma indeed.

#15 · Chapter 1 · 64w, 6d ago · 1 · ·

>>2014594 Uncalled for, Plum. :ajbemused: Besides Ninja: according to the site rules, you're not supposed to do 'first' posts anyways without something else to say. Personally I never saw the point but 'eh'. So let's just leave that there, shall we... please Enjoy the story. :ajsmug:

#16 · Chapter 1 · 64w, 6d ago · · 2 ·

>>2014594:unsuresweetie:WELL SORRY, SOMEONE POSTED 3 SECONDS BEFORE ME AND MY RELOAD WAS SLOW OK:twilightangry2: WHY DO YOU THINK THAT I WENT BACK AND CHANGED IT?

#17 · Chapter 1 · 64w, 6d ago · · ·

It's here!  It's finally here! :pinkiehappy:

So, Pinkie's a mad scientist?

Who cares!  Yippee!

*Bzzzzt*  Warning:  Errors detected in source code.  Please rectify:

Under Citadel Conventions, these crimes are immediately upgraded to Capital offenses

Missing period, and there's just way too much capitalization in this box.  What's Up With That?

#18 · Chapter 1 · 64w, 6d ago · · ·

>>2014630>>2014634

Well, first posting is a bannable offence, so...

Either way, I'm content to let it drop.

>>2014604

That's not Fluttershy, I'm afraid :twilightsmile:

#19 · Chapter 1 · 64w, 6d ago · · ·

>>2014630:pinkiehappy:Oh, but I did have something else to say, so I'm safe:rainbowwild:

>>2014641no, not really. That actually never happens in the real world, but they say that to discourage it.

#20 · Chapter 1 · 64w, 6d ago · · ·

>>2014604 Uhh that's Pinkie Pie. :pinkiesmile: But by all means, let him know yourself. This pic is up in his gallery, just click the 'source' link under the cover page.

#21 · Chapter 1 · 64w, 6d ago · · ·

oh, and as an idea, steal the first batch of comments with the choices listed on each chapter with stuff to vote on, and have people thumbs up their choices. down votes would have no standing on the outcomes, only upvotes.

#22 · Chapter 1 · 64w, 6d ago · · 1 ·

Curse you Twilight fans

Yay! The next installation! From Twilight's perspective.

Oh this will be fun.

I will vote options that either screw somebody over or just are bad in the long run.

#23 · Chapter 1 · 64w, 6d ago · 1 · ·

>>2014657 but... I like the comments. :fluttershysad: I do hope they contain more than just the vote personally, but still, It pleases me to see the readers take their time to vote, even if they are voting in the minority and know so at the time.

#24 · Chapter 1 · 64w, 6d ago · · ·

>>2014656

oh, the coat color under the labcoat looks yellow, and the mane style looks very similar, if a bit shorter than, Flutter's. Anywho, off to go compliment an awesome artist.

#25 · Chapter 1 · 64w, 6d ago · · ·

>>2014665

Alright, was just a suggestion for streamlining. I know some authors don't like cluttered comments sections.

I look forward to this story, and I'm glad I'm actually here as this one is being written, as I read the last one after it was completed (I started reading your stuff around when you started the current Doctor Whooves story)

Anyhow, have a nice day, it made me squee that you responded so quickly.

#26 · Chapter 1 · 64w, 6d ago · · ·

Bad Forty Two! Bad changeling-mech! :rainbowlaugh:

I've been really looking forward to this, it's going to be fantastic.

#27 · Chapter 1 · 64w, 6d ago · · ·

Hmmm, I hate 'ponies fuck yeah' (not that this is 'ponies fuck yeah') and the pony race is in an extremely delicate situation.  You know what this calls for?

EQUESTRIAN EMPIRE!  All shall bow to the pony Overlords!  Mwuahahahaha!  Let's make Twilight future-Hitler!

#28 · Chapter 1 · 64w, 6d ago · · ·

Oh god, this story is finally here. I'd squee so hard right now if sqeeing was something I ever did.

#29 · Chapter 1 · 64w, 6d ago · · ·

Okay, I would like to state that this is better than I expected of this, I will track this:twilightsmile:

#30 · Chapter 1 · 64w, 6d ago · · ·

Oh yes, I am going to enjoy this! And I sincerely hope that 42 manages to get a security-cam view of Sparatus's reaction.....:rainbowlaugh:

#31 · Chapter 1 · 64w, 6d ago · · ·

It begins...

#32 · Chapter 1 · 64w, 6d ago · · ·

So it begins.  Can't to see were this story leads.  The only Idea I can put forth at thus time is that maybe Twilight should think about how long she wants to stay on the Citadel.  It might be prudent for her to develop a power base elsewhere.  I'll be sure to share with you any ideas I come up with.

#33 · Chapter 1 · 64w, 6d ago · · ·

So much squee here. :heart::heart: And I missed out on the chance to do so for Equestrian Equation, but this time I get to take part in the voting! SO AWESOME! :rainbowkiss::yay::rainbowkiss::yay::rainbowkiss:

#34 · Chapter 1 · 64w, 6d ago · 1 · ·

>>2014646

Tell that to EpicDonus.

Oh wait.

You can't.

Because he's banned.

Comment posted by Rainbow Ninja deleted at 8:46pm on the 24th of January, 2013
#36 · Chapter 1 · 64w, 6d ago · · ·

>>2014805

Someone who ran around the site first-posting ":rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss:" on any blog or story he could find.

Comment posted by Rainbow Ninja deleted at 8:46pm on the 24th of January, 2013
#38 · Chapter 1 · 64w, 6d ago · · ·

>>2014831

Same situation, as he was banned for first-posting, something which you claimed didn't happen.

I'm happy to leave this be, just don't earn yourself a ban for being stupid.

Comment posted by Rainbow Ninja deleted at 8:46pm on the 24th of January, 2013
#40 · Chapter 1 · 64w, 6d ago · · ·

My favourite character of the show leading equestrian survivors through space and hardship? I'll definitely follow this. :twilightsmile:

#41 · Chapter 1 · 64w, 6d ago · · ·

Yes! it's back!

#42 · Chapter 1 · 64w, 6d ago · · ·

Ok, I am officially stoked for this story! I really enjoyed the first one. I have one question: have the events of the other ME2 DLC missions taken place yet, like Overload or the Shadow Broker? Just curious. Keep up the great work!

#43 · Chapter 1 · 64w, 6d ago · 1 · ·

In the words of Twilight herself

YESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYES

:twilightsmile::twilightsmile::twilightsmile::twilightsmile::twilightsmile::twilightsheepish::twilightblush:

SO SO SO Hyped for this. I love the first one, and this time I can actually take part in the choices.

I am so loving 42. Paybacks a bitch Councillor. Enjoy it.

#44 · Chapter 1 · 64w, 6d ago · 1 · 1 ·

Manual for this story:

1. Favorite it.

2. Up-vote it.

3. Read it.

4. Comment on it.

5. ...

6. Profit!

#45 · Chapter 1 · 64w, 6d ago · · ·

To move the mouse to the "like button" would cost a percentage of a decimal's worth of a calorie!

#46 · Chapter 1 · 64w, 6d ago · · ·

Awesome can't wait for more and, I thank you for writing this story.

#47 · Chapter 1 · 64w, 6d ago · · ·

>>2014935

According to in-story continuity, Firewalker and Overlord: yes. Shadow Broker and Arrival: not yet. Also this story begins immediately after the "Suicide Mission," for reference.

#48 · Chapter 1 · 64w, 6d ago · · ·

Oh hell yes!

IT BEGINS

Also, 42 just did what most of us wish we could have throughout the whole trilogy.

#49 · Chapter 1 · 64w, 6d ago · · ·

I REALLY enjoyed ME2: TEE and I'm more than happy to see it's going to continue. :pinkiehappy:

So a fav and a like is most likely the wisest course of choice. :twilightsmile:

#50 · Chapter 1 · 64w, 6d ago · · ·

"I'm Garrus Vakarian and this is now my favourite fic on the Internet."

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