• Member Since 17th Jan, 2013
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PenileCorrectionSurgery


*blasts out if airlock into sun*

Comments ( 57 )

Hmm, I like this. I cry MOAR!

this is really good i like

1981065 Don't worry, there'll be moar next week. :moustache:

There is no word to describe how magnificient your story is, sir::twilightsmile::. YOU... ARE... BLOODY... BRILLIANT!!!!:yay: Please continue to write more, i implore you:raritywink:!

2048930 Pear, wtf do you want. It's not like you co-wrote this story. go away. :derpytongue2::pinkiecrazy::eeyup::moustache::moustache::moustache::yay::rainbowkiss::ajbemused:

This is amazing, albeit, a little grim, but the storyline is brilliant and it's written perfectly, keep it up guys /) :heart:

2083926 Don't put love hearts... look at all the lovely pony emoticons, why would you choose a heart over derpy or spike with a moustache.

:fluttercry: :pinkiecrazy: :flutterrage: :rainbowkiss: :raritycry: :moustache::moustache::moustache: :eeyup: :derpytongue2::derpytongue2::derpytongue2:

Well ok then :3 :moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:

Oh look at that, I didn't know that someone had read "Tears of the Fallen Star", is Starbolt in this?

2094117 Wut? I can honestly say I have no idea what you're going on about.

ooooooohhhhhh, I see what you mean now, the picture. Yeah, I just stole that from google images. It's only temporary and John Wilkes Booth (seriously) is drawing me an original one soon. so yeah, sorry if you get annoyed by shiz.

2094319 No worries, got curious

2261731 That's my co-writer, he's a bit of an anime obsessive. I just couldn't think of anything better so it stuck. :moustache:

2261731 I defo didn't watch Code Geass and name our fanfic in tribute, I have no idea what you're talking about. *shifty eyes*

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I'm not complaining, I love that show. :pinkiehappy:

2261766 Code Geass is like my favourite anime ever. So epic :rainbowdetermined2: But yeah, we were like halfway through writing it under some really bland name when we thought "Let's change the name" I thought of AOTR, Randomguy couldn't think of anything better, and here we are :moustache:

Comment posted by PenileCorrectionSurgery deleted Mar 13th, 2013

2261766 2261783 wtf? comment randomly deleted itself... :derpytongue2: Thanks for the fave btw. /)

you stupid faggot

reported for terrorism

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No problem. And who is your favourite character? I'm partial to C2 myself.

2262490 Gotta be Lelouch, he's so awesome. It's rare to have a character who excels in tactics and strategy, and can still be a massive badass. Suzaku is ok, but he's really whiny and delusional until the last few episodes.

2267850
I agree, I'm a little ashamed to admit this, but I almost cried when Shirley met her fate.

2267908 We all did, bro. We all did. :fluttercry:

aww, I don't like being totally lost in the conversation happening on my story... :rainbowhuh:

2270720 It's only because you're an anime-hating psychopath, don't beat yourself up over it.

2271247 Joe has decided to go back to his third person narrative, he thinks you are a douche. :trixieshiftright::trixieshiftright::trixieshiftright::trixieshiftright: Trixie understands Joe's third person ways!

2271308 You think Joe's 3rd person perspective is lacking in comparison to your 2nd person style. :pinkiecrazy:

2271315 Joe thinks you are a hypocrite because you dropped your second person narrative.

This is a good story (so far). It can be a bit confusing at times, but manages to be enjoyable. Good on yous. :moustache:

Highly professional work, as always.

2625600 Just because I dumped the entirety of the second half of the story in one chapter entitled "The rest" it doesn't mean I'm sloppy at all. Pear. Harrumph.

RIP Archangel of the Rebellion -- It didn't have the best grammar, best syntax, best plotline or the best world-building. Its name was terrible, the main character turned into a Mary Sue and it didn't make any fucking sense. But it had giant death-robots, and that's what matters.

Goodbye, my old friend :fluttercry:

*Salutes*

I see this story is cancelled, but nevertheless:

clutched in their hands

Hands.
I hope I dont see the same mistake on such a intrestings story, Mr. Random.

No one cares? I care! But I understand why you decided to cancel it.

I hate you. I loved this story.

hey has this always had 4 dislikes or did some faggot want to kick us when we're down

also are we going to delete this and resubmit the reboot as its own new story or wat

4274675 You know it must stay to serve as an example. It is the way it was always meant to be.

Ah, "N.B.", the single most misused acronym on the internet.

And just to spite you, I'm gonna read this.

And I'm gonna like it.

Ooh, nice start. A little cliffhanger cliche -- "That was 600 years ago" -- but besides that, nice.

WELL ALRIGHT THEN.

Kinda breezed by. I didn't feel much about his poor widdle kids being hung and stabbed and his wife being shot on any emotional level, just "oh cool now he snaps yay blood and death all hail Khorne".

Er, wot?

Why'd he stave in the head of the bartender? One line about how he swindled other ponies out of their money -- it's a slum. How does he know that the bartender isn't just letting the beggars sit by his door so they can maybe earn a bit more from the people who can afford a bit more?

I... I'm sorry. I tried.

I really tried to get super enthusiastic about it but I couldn't because it's hard to get enthusiastic about dark stories even though I really like the way you did Luna and the little message he wrote which made me laugh by the way but also cry because Celestia became evil and I don't like evil people because they don't care about others and I'm one of the others they'd be evil to so maybe it's selfish like Celestia is even with Luna warring against here but somehow not doing anything over the six centuries to help anyone like those poor soldiers who died in what was apparently a string of murders even though it was two locations and five deaths and not like thirty in eight locations heading towards the castle which would be so cool because then he could join the NLR with bloody hooves and with the question of how Luna isn't dead after starting a revolution against her sister that's so public that its name is spray-painted onto the billboards.

Oh, I love run-on sentences so much.

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