Twilight Sparkle has one of the most important assignments she's ever gotten from Princess Celestia. Help Midnight Dreamer, one of Princess Luna's proteges, learn how to make friends in Ponyville. This assignment is much, much easier said than done, because Midnight Dreamer is...well...such a dreamy pony. Will Twilight be able to successfully complete this assignment? Will Midnight Dreamer make new friends? Keep reading to find out!
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I think you should rewrite the first chapter and state the she is luna's student because it isnt said in the story at all.Also make her a little bit more shy because she just now seems to have a put down personality.
Thanks...this is my first ponyfic, so your input is welcome to make this better!
personalities are a little off but not really that bad, they're just a tad subdued
nice chapter and story so far