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Tardis of Dr Whooves


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After some freak mishap with the portal energy reacting with the moon, Wheatley finds himself transported into Equestria! Madness and randomness ensures!

Thanks to Tardis33 for the idea! Now to write the story! :P

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 14 )

YES!!!!
that is all i have to say about this story

1970084
Thanks! I saw this post on one of the forums talking about including portal characters in fics. I figured it'd be a good way for me to start off with a HiE fic. A crossover one! :)

Gak

It's cold and I'm not used to be outside.

"be" should be "being".

Hah! It is! The book tells all!

"book tells" should be "books tell"

She calmly let out a breath and began to question Wheatley about what he is

Notice you use began and then used is in the same sentence. Try to not switch between past and present tense. :twilightsmile:

Just a few errors I found, feel free to delete this.

It's fine! Glad actually! Thanks for pointing them out for me! :)

This is what I saw when I saw this

"Craziest? Fit in perfectly? ARE YOU CALLING ME A MORO-gah!"

Ahh music so comforting with Wheatley.

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Believe it or not, that is one of the vids that helped inspire this! :3

I was not expecting feels of this caliber.

WHEATLEY!!!!!THIS IS AWESOME! AH LAV WHEATERZ :heart::heart::heart::heart:

So... Wheatley's human?
Sorry, I haven't read the description...

IS THERE ANOTHER CHAPTER?? :pinkiegasp: I need to know what happens next! Plz make another one... :raritydespair:

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