We don't know a lot about the pink-coated and multi-hued mane princess; we know that she is the Crystal Princess and that she was Twilight Sparkle's foalsitter. What we don't know, however, is what happened from the time after Sombra was banished to present day Equestria... So what did happen?
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Well... An interesting beginning - it has the possibility to become a fully fledged fanfic with the intro you've provided. You may want to outline a Plot, delving in deeper into her emotions, the heartache if her mother and father's deaths, and the worry over watching her aunt sink into the same depression as her mother, before her demise. This story will go far if you detail it right, if you push yourself, fine-tuning your style so that it sets you apart from other authors. Good job, though, and I hope you feel the need to expand this into a longer fanfic!
1942144 Thank you very much for the wonderful comment! I'll be sure to elaborate more on those things ^_^
As I am more of an artist than a writing, I am certainly trying to best to write something worthwhile
Hmm, fat jokes... I don't know whether to laugh or punch a nearby wall...
1952675 If you don't like fat jokes, I can always edit it ^_^
I was just very sleepy when I wrote it, so you'll have to excuse my terribleness. I'm going over it now.
1953547 Nah, I'll let it slide, seeing as Celestia is cool and Cadance is just a filly. I just have a problem with those jokes because my mom used to be made fun of for being overweight. She's not anymore, but some people still make bad jokes about her...
1953586 Oh, I'm really sorry for bring those awful memories back
I got bullied for quite the opposite reason, so I definitely know how it feels. However, I wanted to show the joke as a light-hearted joke to lighten the mood. I hope it doesn't bother anyone else.
1953626 Here's hoping. But when I remember that joke, I also remember beating the crap out of the guy who started it in the first place, for a completely unrelated incident, namely throwing my book bag and it's contents into the community urinal. The extent of his injuries: Let's just say he hasn't gone near me for a couple of years, despite his having joined a street gang and brutally getting revenge against anyone who he thinks has wronged him. He's already been arrested several times on assault charges, at least three of those involved a deadly weapon.
1953646 Oh wow, I wouldn't want to mess with you o_o