For those interested in the song so much

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aTqHbiE0vl8

Hope you enjoy the story

What is this? There is no description, so im wary of reading.

Give me an explanation, i wont go into a fan fic without a description as a guide.  

Cheers

~iraqlobstah

>>147480147480

I second this.

>>147480147480

Maybe I should revise the description, but I'd figure you'd derive from my disclaimer and the youtube link I posted.

Crap, now you have that song stuck in my head, AGAIN! Oh well... I guess I should read it... It's very good, I must say. I hope to write as good as you someday! Tracked, starred, favorited!

Wow, this is actually quite interesting, I shall read further!

Thank you. That was the first positive comment I've received so far, and from Deadpool no less :U

Expect more chapters soon

>>148538148538

Not a problem at all! I love the way you characterize The Shadowman, even though I've only seen a few clips with him in it (I've never watched the actual movie, sadly.) And that really makes the entire fic so good.

>>148555148555 Thanks again, that means a lot :U

Also, no worries if you haven't seen it or not. It's good to have a familiar feel with the so-called protagonist of this story XD

Ive been looking for a story like this for ages! KICKASS!!! ^_^

Well, an interesting story so far, and i will deffinatley be tracking this. The only problem i have with it is the dialougue. Every speaker needs their own paragraph, as i have been told myself. But, other than that, it's a great story, and i can't wait to see more

Excellent

WOOT! THE SHADOWMANS BACK! ^_^

Shadowman being a good guy? HA thisle be good :P

p.s. bring on the voodoo already! ^_^ I wanna see him putting that cutie mark to use ^_^

Dang, I read the new two chapters, then go watch The Last Roundup, and come back to a new chapter! Did you write most/all of it before and are just now uploading it or are you a writing superhero?

I'm gonna be honest, I made chapter 10 AFTER watching the newest episode so I'd know I wouldn't have to make any major revisions to the story XD

I started the fic from the first chapter 3 days ago, and I udpate almost frequently, thanks to my free time and ideas.

>>149829149829 Thanks for the feedback. I also enjoyed your fanfic as well . It reminded me that being a werewolf had it's perks, and that it's good to make an alternate ending to appeal to the audience.

>>151359151359 Good chapter, as always, and it's cool to find someone who likes one of my fics, who's the author of a fic that i like, lol.

Yey a new chapter ^_^

with how fast you update your soooo my new favourite author, also love what you did with the orange (Nothing rhyms with that word!)

p.s. since falicier is afraid of the "are you ready" song does this mean he wont ever use it again? could he still use the first bit (friends of the other side)? or would he use other music while doing voodoo?

>>153104153104 Well yes, seeing as how he listened to that song for a painstakingly long time. As for the other song, just wait and see. More to come XD

Crap, Zecora has just resorted to a ponies equivalent of chemical warfare- The Poison Joke!

>>153772153772

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silly Zecora is silly

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please keep up the awesome work my good sir.

Zacora and those animals need to learn the one golden rule that must always be remembered around the good doctor: DONT MESS WITH DA VOODOO!

seriously there just asking for it :P cant wait to see him snap ^_^

most excellent my good sir please keep up the awesome work.

Oh.....this is gonnna be gooooooood

Nobody makes a fool out of dt falicier and gets away with it

p.s. Angel bunny got pwned

p.s.s. You are officialy my favourite author, how do you update so fast and still produce such awsome chapters?

>>155464155464 You're too kind and as mentioned before, I have free time.

Just you wait, he's close to being the same doctor we know and love, minus his 'friends'

If there was one problem, its that at times the doctor fails to rhyme. Like when he says "That mare ain't bestin' me today! No one makes a foal outta Dr. Facilier!!" Either I'm bad at finding rhymes or theirs none there.

>>156229156229 His name has an accented 'e' sound at the end, basically showing his name sounds French almost. I'd figure you'd get a better feel at how his name sounded from how AJ, Rainbow, and Pinkie pronounced it in the previous chapters.

Ah yes, nothing can make a villain's heart grow like Fluttershy with a juicebox...

>>156299156299 ikr?

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Although, it was more along the lines of diabeetus infliction rather than moving him :U

We all know these ponies can kill with cuteness, especially Fluttershy.

Bad Doctor. No voodoo for you. *takes doll* Zecora is a nice zebra, you're a big meanie pants...I hope I wasn't too bold.

>>156315156315 lol

I finally completed my physics exam and then I come home to a new chapter......BEST DAY EVER!!!!

Falicier's FINALLY going on the offencive zacora's gonna die

in the words of internet meme's: "DIS IZ GONNA BE GOOOOOOOOOOD!"

This is interesting... now if you excuse me I must return 2 my studies

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Keep up the good work my good sir.

AAAAWWWWWW SHIT! Zecora's gonna get iiiiiiittt. Now she'll learn not to buck with the "good" doctor.

Dang, I was soooo close to going to bed! But nooooo! You just HAD to update it during my final update run! ... Thank you...

>>156266156266

Ah, sorry. I didn't know for sure how to pronounce the name and so didn't see the pattern.

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keep up the awesome work my good sir.

>>157387157387 You just made my day with that image, good sir. Glad to hear you still like this XD

I hope whoever is reading this enjoys this chapter, because 'I' sure did while I worked on it

NEVER BREAK A PINKIE PROMISE PEOPLE! Got it?

And poor Zecora. That big meanie pants! He deserved what was coming to him...Although, I mean...if the author thinks it's okay.

>>158101158101 Oh don't worry, it is...Cuz I'm just that messed up

best...story...of all time......

Are you even sleep?

most excellent please keep up the good work my good sir.

>>158204158204 Seth never sleeps why should he.

Oh shadowman, you so funny. I read the entire story with transformation station looping constantly in the background.

Deadpool... That name sound familiar...

But in partial seriousness, I love how diabolical Facilier is even after all the "second chance" stuff, and how he's slowly getting filled with the warm-fuzzyness that is our Flutters.

>>158278158278

I would have done that but I have a hard time concentrating with good music also begging for attention. Why are villain songs so good???

Are you ready...

>>158836158836 Well, you know what they say: Evil dresses better than good

Wait a minute, that only leaned towards appearance...Well, regardless, villains have that special kick to their songs when they have the opportunity to sing.

♫♥I look forward to reading what happens next in your story♥♪

Hmmm......not ofter you see a voodoo doctor working in a hospital.......or would it be called a vet?

Anyway awsome chapter as always

Nurse Tenderheart? NO! She barely gets any attention. Not her you big dumb meanie!

♫♥I look forward to reading what happens next in your story♥♪

i love how the song ended just as i read the last word

>>162501162501 So hilarious indeed. Glad you enjoyed the chapter

This is getting better and better. For some reason, I love redemption stories, and you managed to make Facilier turning (somewhat) good believable.

You can have my stars.

Everyday i check for updates five times.........and every day its.........WORTH IT

This story kicks ass!!!!

Okay, Doctor, you are officaly okay in my book. I shall now allow you to date Fluttershy. Don't break her heart or it's straight to the moon with you, or a crazed demon infested dimension...WOW! I never thought I'd think the moon a better choice.

The redemption of the "good" doctor is quite believable, so far. mistaking the feeling of helping another for heartburn(which i've don a couple times, i admit) makes me lol

This is getting awesome, please keep up the epic work my good sir.

Ah, the old Oblivion Guard line...

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That is all, keep up the awesome work my good sir.

another awsome chapter......*Long inhale*.......................................yey!

Angry Ditzy is best Ditzy!

"THEN PAY WITH YOUR BLOOD!"..... best....... line..... ever

Oh god, DERPY as an oblivion guard? Actually, that explains why they could see through a wall to find you doing something bad.

Wow, I think I may have said this already, but I like how your not just throwing Dr. Facilier into love. Your easing him little by little into love, friendship, and goodness. Keep it up!

super shady stuff will be goin down

Sweet mother of diabeetes...

This is a wonderful fic and you should feel wonderful.

Excellent

this is great and you should feel great. Now, i request moar devious devilry from the doctor. and maybe a Dr. Whooves cameo..... doctor meets doctor..... oh sweet jesus.....

>>166219166219 I don't think I can help you with the second part, but expect more devious planning from the good ol' Shadowcolt in the coming chapters.

an awsome chapter as always

DONT BE DOIN THIS TO ME WITH THE CLIFFHANGERS

if they play the song on purpose...................ooooooh..........the doctors gonna snap

dis iz gonna be goooooooooood ^_^

>>170385170385

Is this Equestrian Deadpool's comment? Nope, Pinkie Testa!

MOAR i wanna see what happens next pleeeeeasseeee

2 in 1 day how happy am i ;D

okay, just got done reading the whole thing and I'm gonna be brutally honest here. I have two points of ire that have bothered me throughout this fic.

1. HOLY SWEET GOD MY EYEBALLS ARE FALLING OUT, PLEASE FOR THE LOVE OF GOD INDENT OR SPACE IT A BIT PLEASE?!?

2. HOW THE HELL DO I HAVE MORE VIEWS THAN YOU!?!? I MEAN SHIT THIS IS AWESOME!

3. No screw you i'ma be me; This....just......here, you may have 25% of the internet as well as well as a cheezeburger

>>171528171528  Thank you very much

Another page of pure awsomenessness

finally fluttershy and the good doctor are together

p.s. am I the only one who thinks all of those potions are gonna have reeeeeeeealy bad side effects?

>>171985171985 Oh, there's no side effects to those kinds of potions, but that doesn't mean he'll brew some now, knowing he helped Vinyl Scratch

The only thing to worry about is Dr. Facilier in the next chapter. Stay tuned

>>171985171985

Side affects only come from terribly-made potions, like the ones the CMC make.

>>171347171347

FFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFF... HOW DARE YOU TEST MY PATIENCE WITH CLIFFHANGERS! MY ATTENTION SPAN IS TOO LO- Hey look, a tree!

fantastic

as nice a job as always. Please at least indent if you're gonna have these massive paragraphs. I'm used to seeing these in books, not in fanfics.

Poor Dr. Why can't those mean ponies just leave him alone. WHY?!! He just wants to be nice in public and do evil things behind everyone's back...but he's changing. I swear it.

now thats just mean! REVENGE TIME!

p.s. awsome chapter as always

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That is all, please keep up the awesome work my good sir.

>>175048175048 Forgive me, I have a pet peeve of making small paragraphs

>>175241175241 Yes...changing...let's go with that

Fluttershy TO THE RESCUE

fluttershy: stared down a dragon that yelled at her friends. screamed at a cockatrice tat turned her friend to stone. went beserk on animals that didnt want to be her friend. Dr. Facilier (who flutters has "feelings" fer) was driven mad and sick, by "something".  taking into account what she's done before the punishment for doing this to what could in the very least one of her "friends"  would at the very least be a soul crushing STARE.

Im just waiting for the doctor to snap ^_^ a villain can only take so much after all

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It happens to the best of us, And thanks for the new chapter!

>>183411183411

Don't worries mate I call a professional...

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please keep up the awesome work my good sir.