thirst!
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good chapter too...
like dad tangents with no point

i Gotta say side a was the best maybe a sequel? keep up the good work!

Well, A was good. Didn't enjoy B, wasn't to my tastes. Shame that Pound/Scootaloo moment never went anywhere though.

I like how the ending of each version sort of ties into the others, a sort of "what could have been". Because of this, I think that there needs to be a fifth version where Pound bangs everyone from the first four at once.

Told ya it would get featured.

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~Skeeter The Lurker

3459315 You did read his name right?

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He be lurkin.

Had his legend not been sworn to secrecy, he would be hailed as a demi-god and issued a flagon of mead every time he stepped out of his bedroom door.

That, and/or mugged by insane fans/stalkers/family

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I half expect Pinkie to offer him a flagon come the morrow.

"Ugh, what is this?"
"It's mead, cutie-colt!"
"It tastes like honey and sadness."
"And now you know why the Vikings went raiding so often!"

So uh, Pumpkin's horn appears to be missing in the cover art. Why is this the detail I'm focussing on? God if I know.

Anywhom, good work! Looking forward to more :3 Pinkie Pie, stop teasin' the poor boy and &*%^ him already!

3460284 No, it's actually there (that teensy bit of yellow in the middle of her mane). It's just difficult to see at story image resolution.

3459315 You must be new here.

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ESPERRRRRRR

Good one too.
Salty revenge for Spoony.
And your aouthor's note!
Well. I shall reply.

Can't wait for the other chapters.

Dragon

Firstly, I would quite like to see a version with Scoots in it.
Secondly, that was possibly the greatest clop fiction I've ever read. It made me laugh so much, and had enough of a decent written story to keep me interested outside of the humour. Seriously, well done, I might have to look into some of your other fictions if they are of that calibre.

I seen that anime before it's kinda funny. No sub titles through. I understand Japanese

Oh Celestia that authors note got me in tears!!!

dear god i demand more

Hey, Your Antagonist, I have a question.

Would this story be considered canon of Serenade of Silver Belles (as in, both stories are in the same universe)? Or is it an AU/entirely separate Silverbelle story?

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I hope for the same as well.

Okay, I have to admit that so far this fic is scandalously awesome. Can't wait for the next two. I hope C is Pound and Scoots. And D has to be either Pinkie or Rarity it just has to be although I could see something mind blowing coming from way out of the left field.

WHEN WILLL THE NEXT PART COME OUT

I CANT WAIT ANYMORE

I choose E) ALL OF THE ABOVE AT THE SAME TIME! AND THE NIGHT SHALL LAST FOREVER! ;)

Firstly, I must commend you on your most fantastic story, it was great. Side A was my favorite so far, in fact, I wish I could have seen more of it.

On that note, I know that I am likely not the first, but I would absolutely love to see a continuation of sequel to side A. This is not meant to be a demand, though, as an editor I know how demands can effect the author, so this is merely informative

The Author's Note... I don't even know how to react, I don't even know how that's related to this fic, and worst of all... I don't even.

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As you wish, mon ami.

3466367 "What? N—" Your Antagonist took a moment to mull over the question. He couldn't pass this opportunity up, afterall he'd never get a chance to mindfuck his audience so grandly again. "Yes. Yes it does. Mr. Cake was a player who had lain with every mare in Ponyville... except his sister."

3466087 Aye, it be part of the same universe, ya inquisitive scallywag. Thar be enough of a time differential and ambiguity between them two stories and the sequel I ain't writ' yet for 'em to share a correlation...Arrr!

3466940 It's a Japanese onomatopoeia for breaking ice.

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Ahh, gotcha.

Thanks for answering!

That'll add a new twist when I get around to rereading Serenade again.

Main protagonist is about Pound Cake.
Title is Having your Cake and eating her out too.
Only female Cakes we know of are Pound Cake's twin sister and mother.
I'M NOT SURE I LIKE WHERE THIS IS GOING.

3468384 only you can decide where it goes.

Damn this is a good clop fic
Time to guess what's next. For C I'm thinking it's scootaloo cause she appear dunk last chapter and maybe some applebloom, doubtful. For D I'm thinking pinkie or rarity however it could also be cup but again I'm doubtful that it's cupcake.

This is VERY good, favourited and liked, will follow when you complete the fic.
By the way, is C or D Pinkie Pie? Because if yes I can follow you right now.

Holy frack the threesome was amazingly done. Kudos my good man.

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So much this^

Having read the three chapters currently out, I feel I need to express how much I enjoyed Track B the most. Maybe I just have a bias for Sweetie Belle but reading this established relationship between an older Sweetie Belle and Silver Spoon really felt... I guess 'fresh' is the best word for it.

One of the biggest things that caught my attention was adult Sweetie Belle talking dirty and getting off on it. Such a thing should have felt shoe-horned in for the sake of clop writing, but that didn't feel like the case. Sweetie gets stereotyped as being the pure and innocent one among her friends, which is fine for her being a young a filly, though to read her grown up and acting like a grown up really sold this story. And maybe I'm crazy, but I thought that the sexual history revealed between her and Silver kind of legitimized them being together, at least, it seemed that way based on how you wrote this. It's a sign of strong writing that something like their relationship, which wasn't the main focus of this chapter, came out so strong and well developed that it never felt questionable or fake. What was really awesome the way we learn this. The more Pound realizes what the two have together, the more the reader realizes it too, and so we get to share in that experience with the main character of this story. That right there is what made this chapter really great for me.

So yeah, good job with this.

I know this may not be a path in the story but i'ed be awsome to see Pound get it on with Babs

Updatin' anytime soon? I need some Pound and Pinkie sexyness

3520162 Probably not, sorry. Check my most recent blog for more details though.

3521770 Aw, that's okay Good luck with everything though! I will patiently await for the sexyness

Wow.
I think this piece has reminded me of the reason I started watching you in the first place.
Very well done!

HEY, WAKE UP AND FINISH SCOOTALOO'S SHOT WITH POUND!!!

Um... please? I mean, if you're done with your re-training and stuff and you don't have anything else you, um, need to do...

The second story in this video was in my head throughout this entire chapter.

That double lucky young stallion fuck!

sad end is sad...why we gotta choose between chapters instead of all of this happening at different times?

Yeah still think this is the best path xD.
So far. Phew

TMNT and Plastic Nee san... Your muses are eclectic. I look forward to the next ending... But I look forward to its inspiration more.

I have to ask, is this a peek at Sweetie and Silvers relationship dynamic in the "The Serenade of Silver Belles" sequel?

Sweetie Belle shuffled her hooves nervously as she deliberated whether or not she could trust his words. Finally decided, she answered him. “Silvy and I…. we… we want you to help us get pregnant.”

“Help me get pregnant is more like it,” Silver Spoon muttered under her breath

OM

“Well? What are you waiting for?” Silver Spoon asked impatiently. “Let’s go.”

Geese Spoon. Unless he's a masochist looking for a Mistress that tone aint going to raise anything but the volume of your voice!

“Silvy, be nice,” Sweetie Belle scolded.

“But he’s useless.”

“Be. Nice.”

“Hmph. Fine.”

I'm sorry.. I'm with Pound, as much as I love Silver Spoon. What DOES see in her? I think I liked her better as a bully at this point, or rather there is no diffrence between filly Silver and adult Ms Spoon. Though granted Silver is the one under allot of stress being the one to bear their foal.

“Awww, you’re blushing, that’s so cute.”

“I really hate you sometimes, Sweetie.”

“Yeah, I know.”

“Stupid bitch,” Silver Spoon teased softly.

“But I’m your stupid bitch,” Sweetie Belle said innocently.

“You really are.” Silver Spoon leaned forth and locked lips with her sweetheart

Okay that was cute!