• Published 12th Jan 2013
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Until I'm In Your Hooves Again - JaydexTheShadowKnight



How will you & Nurse Redheart Handle being apart for a week, right before Hearth's Warming Day?

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*Me when I saw this story.*
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(Just Kidding.=D)

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This chapter/story is good...

Bravo excellent work, good sir! This was worth the wait, an- I jus-... There are no words to describe of how brilliantly executed this story is! Good- no, Exquisite job! =D
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This story, my friend, has so much yes to it, it's hard finding stories like this, very good and keep up the good work!
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I will take my leave for now so,
Cheers!
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P.S. Sorry for so many GIF's, it's just that I don't know how to express my feelings for this story...
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Sorry, now I will leave.

It's here!!! Good feels await! :yay:

1945107
I hope so! :twilightsmile:

1945117
Oh yes, in all three chapters! :raritystarry:

1945122
Thank you, I hope you enjoy the story! :yay:

Just curious, would you consider giving my fic a look? It's only one chapter so far, but would love to have someone as established as yourself look it over!

Amazing story friend!

WHO THE FFFFffffffffffffffff... 'Ahem'
What I meant to say was, people who dislike this story, are just hateful people that can't understand a good story, or they're just to lazy to read this series.

But still,
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Interesting tale old chap!

Bravo! I'm really glad to see more people who can write stories that whilst containing explicit scenes are more than mere vehicles for sexual gratification.:moustache:

Me and Redheart are so active, constant unending sex almost every night. We must love eachother :pinkiesad2: SO MUCH!

The feels this story gave me it made me feel as if i was going to spontaneous combust from the inside with all the love and joy in this story i cried many a joyful tears over this story you sir have always been a favorite author of mine and i enjoy all of you stories on Fimfiction especially your nurse redheart fics please continue writing this saga it is to wonderful to stop and end :heart:

Commence read. :scootangel:
This is going to be great.

Ya automatic like and fave for me because all of these are usually awesome.

I tire of these fics... at least the writing was good. I will not comment on the whole concept, though...

This has been and will always be the Trifecta of perfection. I'm just glad I had tissues close to hand.
Bravo!

The love they share reminds me of the love Mr. Freeze has for his beloved Nora, only unlike poor Victor, for this guy everything's gone right. We need a Mr. Freeze x Pony romance / redemption fic...

Daw daw daw daw daw daw daw daw daw dawdawdawdawdawdawdawdawdaw *explosion*
O god damn it! You broke the 'daw' machine!:ajbemused::pinkiesad2:

Once again, a fantastic story! Please keep it up - you're stories are billiant! :pinkiehappy:

This was most likely the best one in the Redheart series. The pacing, the heart-felt moments, this had everything. Twilight, score please.

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BTW, if ever need a proofreader, you will always have me on-call.

1947307
Thanks for pointing out those few typos. I knew I was going to miss a few. I have fixed them. All but the twenty of five. You can say 'to' or 'of'. All my life I've been around people that say, "It's twenty of five or it's five of four." Anyway, I'm glad you enjoyed the story. I have to agree, it is the best so far, but the other two have their place.

1947125
Thank you, I'll do my best! :twilightsmile:

1947085
Whoops, we'd better get that fixed! :twilightsheepish:

1946915
Glad you enjoyed it! I tried to put everything I could into it! :eeyup:

1945854
Have no fear, I still have two more Redheart stories planned, with a third not to far behind. I'm just not sure how soon, till I start the fourth. I have some other projects that need tending to. But thank you for your support and for commenting! :raritystarry:

1945741
You got it! :raritywink: But as with the make-out scene, you don't go all the way everytime.

1945709
Yeah, I suspect that's not for everyone, that's why I crammed everything else into it. This way there is still a little something for everyone! Oh and don't worry about the gifs from your other comment. They do the job nicely! :twilightsmile:

1945339
I fixed both errors. Thanks for pointing them out. I knew I'd miss a few. :twilightsheepish:

1945210
Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it!

1945461
That's my goal. Working mature content into a story, and yet the story and the sex need each other to work, plus it's not just sex, it's something more emotional.

Omg u out done ur self again dude that story was awesome
Can't wait to read the next part :)
Don't ever stop making good stories like this :)
Can't wait to here when ur starting the next chapter to this :)

1947470 Well I can't fault you for how you were raised then. To me, it makes more sense to say "to five" instead "of five", but I digress. My offer still stands BTW.

Gah! So many of these... I haven't even had time to finish the second one!!! :flutterrage:

(Joke) Alt. Title: Until I'm In The Featured Box Again

Gah so close to 30k! AH WHO CARES!? Time to read!

Finally got to reading this since I was away from my computer all day yesterday :pinkiecrazy: But I read it all :twilightsmile: loved it :heart: and now will commence waiting for your other stories :pinkiehappy: :rainbowkiss: :yay:

Placing your hand over your heart, you know when next you both meet, your love with have strengthened more than ten fold.

Your love "will" have...
Loving this!!!:pinkiesmile:

*EDIT* SO MUCH DAW, TEARS, AND PEE!!!
SO MUCH PEEEEEEEE!!!
I'm starting to think that water sports is one of your forte?

Once again you made a mind blowing story that I enjoyed beginning to end so here's something special for you.

see you next time.

Still love that this became a series, can't wait for the next installment.:heart:

loved it
...you know what I give up of fighting the fluffy sappy romance of this series. if you remember my previous comments sappy isn't my thing and then you hit my cynicism with a freight train.........so yep I'm still eagerly awaiting the next installment

i enjoyed this alot you are very good i can't wait for more. thank you for the great storie. :rainbowdetermined2:

1947526
I'm always happy to hear when readers like you really enjoy my stories. I will be certainly working on the next installment before too long. But first, I have some other projects to see to. :twilightsmile:

1948062
Oh, you'll need to read my fic: "More Than Their Customer", the reason why humans are in Equestria is explained there. Though Celestia doesn't give you an explanation that you understand. You'll have to read my spa pony fic to know what I mean. It's actually one of my most popular fics to date.

1948111
Glad you enjoyed it after the first chapter. Ah so you see how it was implanted in there, did ya? :twilightsheepish: I do have just one tiny question, what about the story flow seemed erratic? If I did mess something up, I want to be able to avoid it in the future. :eeyup:

1948281
Have no fear. Take your time, these Redheart fics aren't going away, and it'll be a while till I work on the 4th one. :yay:

1948307
That made me lol. And what do you know, it was in the feature box for a little bit. I guess the long length caused it to slip out, because I suspect a number of my readers are still savoring it. :twilightsheepish:

1949024
Glad you liked it my friend. It's good hearing from you too! Now I wonder what story I will work on next. I have some ideas, and some updates for ongoing fics needed as well. :twilightsmile:

1949173
Whoops, another typo. "Fixed!" Thanks for pointing that out. Thrilled that you loved it. :raritystarry: Oh, and you mentioned water sports seems to one of my fortes. Are you saying this is a good thing or a bad thing? Just curious.

1949410
Thank you my friend! Seeing that clip of the G-man celebrating brought back some memories. I'm more of a fan of the 90's Godzilla moves and the 2000 series, but still have to enjoy the older ones...classic! :pinkiehappy: Anyway I'll see you when I post my next story or in my blogs! Glad you liked this one!

1949726
You and me both. I plan to make as many fun Redheart stories as I can think of. I just really love writing about her. :heart:

1950234
Glad I was able to derail your cynicism, and thrilled that you loved it! I remember well from your past comments that sappy romances aren't your thing, yet you do indeed seem to remain eager, while waiting on more. I'll be sure to deliver, as soon as I can. I have a few other projects that need tended to before I can get to the next sequel. But it will be in the works. :raritywink:

1950391
Thank you my friend! I'm hoping it won't be too long till I get to work on the next Redheart story, but for now I think I'll let another pony have the spotlight. :twilightsheepish:

>>JaydexTheShadowKnight
Oh no not at all. Just wondering since it's seems to be a recurring theme.
Whatever is fine, i just love your stories too much to care about fetishes!:raritywink:

1950823
I was just curious. I won't lie, it's something I do enjoy writing about, and since I set the stage for it in the first story I thought I'd have some more fun with it in this one. I was going to work it into the second one, but it felt poorly tacked on in every spot I tried to use it. So I figured I'd save it for this one, and future installments. I won't be using this fetish in all of my stories, just a select few. BTW what you read in this story is about as far as i delve into this fetish anyway. But no worries, I just couldn't help but be curious. :twilightsmile:

1950858
I've read too many stories with water sports to care about it. At first I hated it and didn't read it again, but as time went on I revisited it and actually kinda liked it. I think it was your story "Applebucking with a beauty" but I can't be sure... :trixieshiftleft:
Ah well, Pee or not, I'm still a fan!:pinkiehappy:

Loved the story.
Wish I could post this comment under happier circumstances though.

I really thought I'd be annoyed by the fetish, but strangely I a accept it :-)

Please, do continue....

You my good sir have really outdone yourself! I love this story and it's a nice addition to the series!

Very, very nice work once again! I can't help but be deeply moved by the beautiful affections displayed here. You sir, have once again, outdone yourself. :pinkiesad2: Now if you excuse me, I need to get some insulin for the diabetes this story gave me.
(BTW, I couldn't help but think in chapter 2 "I wish they could Skype each-other so they wouldn't feel so lonely!" Did anyone else think that?)

1950890
I'll be sure to do that. I checked out a little bit so far, and you sound familiar. You didn't happen to do a reading on 4chan regarding a short Luna story by a user calling himself "Lunafag" did you?

1951190
Why aren't they happier circumstances? Is something wrong? I don't mean to pry, but I can't help but wonder. :pinkiesad2:

1951524
Yep, but fear it's length made its reign short, but so what, I can at least say all three of my Redheart fics have been featured. And (as Dumbledore) "Now, that's saying something." (Sorry I'm a bit of a Harry Potter fan, blame my mom. :rainbowlaugh:)

1951737
Glad it didn't bother you, maybe it's the intimate aspect that makes it tolerable. And yeah, I know there are a few spelling errors that I missed, but at least I nipped most of them in the bud. :twilightsheepish: And have no fear, I shall certainly continue this series. I really enjoy writing about Redheart!

1952892
I was hoping I could outdo myself, but now I need to find a way to do so again. But, I need to take a break from Redheart and work on some of my other projects, lest my readers get too restless. :raritywink: As much as I enjoy these stories about my favorite nurse, I doubt I can stay away from these for too long.

1953205
I was hoping to outdo myself, but it's not always possible. And I'm starting to get used to my romance stories causing people to need insulin for the diabetes they seem to develop from reading them. :twilightsheepish:

1953327
The world is not smiling on the choices I've made recently

Great series of stories. It's adorably cheesy.
The whole watersports-esque stuff isn't really my thing, but still great.

1954115
Don't feel too bad, I cry every time I read it. :raritycry:

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For what it's worth...you have my sympathies. :pinkiesad2:

1956091
Glad you enjoy this series. I know the watersports-esque stuff isn't for all, but that's why I try to put plenty of other material in, so there is still a little something for everyone. :twilightsmile: BTW, love your Derpy avatar! She looks so cute!

Thank you,it's looking to be a bad year.2012 was hard enough

Adorable, reminds me of a Christmas I had with my second ex. The only difference, the Santa girl outfit. The bitch never liked skimpy clothes and always had a pair of jeans.

Awwwwwwwww....That was awwwwwwww.:twilightsmile:

Wait a kettle and it is light? cool.:twilightblush:

With their love for each other and the months they've spent together, I wonder when anon(me, the reader) will pop the question. :ajsmug:: Hint Hint

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"You" and Redheart have only been together for about 10 months. There's no need to rush into marriage just yet. But have no fear, it's on the back burner. I have quite a few Redheart fics in mind. I want to do a few more stories that will eventually lead to the question being popped! :raritywink:

1967569
I'm glad I have a vivid imagination, so I can easily picture her in that getup. Sadly I've found no such pic of her dressed this way online. I'm surprise more readers didn't comment about that part. Oh well, I guess it was covered in the whole "loved it" part of most people's comments, which is more than okay by me! :eeyup:

1974211
Why thank you. Yeah, I'm not sure why some writers always seem to go for the extreme, I myself enjoy working it in the way I do. And I like the way you noted my way as being much more "normal". Your comment is very appreciated! :twilightsmile:

A nice story about a human and a pony that love each other, but the piss things was extremely weird dude. At least you didn't do dual pooping or something like that, then I would have had to thumbs down it.

:heart::heart: I loved it! And I can't believe there's going to be another! So romantic, so hot, and I cried at one point! Bravo!:heart::heart:

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