I was on my way to Tennocon in Quebec, dressed as my personal Tenno from the game Warframe. I saw a costume shop with a perfect looking Amp, and stepped inside to buy it, and upon putting it on my arm found myself in Equestria.
After a semi-productive day of job hunting and FIM watching, our protagonist takes a nap on their couch. They find themselves in a wonderful dream in the land of Equestira, and it all seems so real! Except, your not supposed to feel pain in dreams...
They say they were a legend, but one survive and now his son will take his place, to show them that they were never monster they thought they were, but he'll show them, he isn't but with they choices he make's will change the course of
it's like my friends once said, if you're gonna fuck up, do it in style. though I'm not sure how I'd rate this one, there I was minding my own business, and the next i've 'dropped in' for a visit to royalty in another dimension.
1. Marcus is not a gamer, he merely made a statement on how he was living that dream of (as far as I'm aware) all gamers, to live in a post apocalyptic environment. 2. will be explained in detail in later chapters. 3. Marcus has spent three years in Equestria, with nearly all of his time spent in or around the castle, so yes he has spent a great deal of time with the princess. 4.will also be explained at a later date
as for your quote
I’ll believe that she raises the sun when I see it; I've always been sceptic towards myths and gods.
Marcus is a sceptic, and a later sleeper, leading to him never seeing the princess raise the sun, nor believing that she could. It probably helps him sleep at night, I'll go ask him.
Interesting start...
I think I would be able to be hooked on the plot, but I think you need to explain this a bit more.
1. how did this gamer get there?
2. Why was he aloud to have a gun?
3. is Marcus normally around royalty? He seems a little too calm around the princess.
4. HOW DID HE GET THERE AND WHY IS EVERYONE SUDDENLY OK WITH HIM?
*cough* I mean... it would be nice if you could explain.
Also,
Could you explain this sentence to me?
Other than that, this seems like a fairly good idea. I'd like to see where this goes
Good luck!
-Blazewing
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1. Marcus is not a gamer, he merely made a statement on how he was living that dream of (as far as I'm aware) all gamers, to live in a post apocalyptic environment.
2. will be explained in detail in later chapters.
3. Marcus has spent three years in Equestria, with nearly all of his time spent in or around the castle, so yes he has spent a great deal of time with the princess.
4.will also be explained at a later date
as for your quote
Marcus is a sceptic, and a later sleeper, leading to him never seeing the princess raise the sun, nor believing that she could. It probably helps him sleep at night, I'll go ask him.