A sophomore in high school. This is gonna be good.
Everypony thinks that the legend of the Slendermane is indeed a legend. Well, Everypony excluding a young mare by the name of Brightly Shining. She ventures to the edge of the Everfree Forest, trying to find it and prove to Equestria that it isn't a myth.
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AAARGH, we're not supposed to actually see slendy attack.
The premise is the complete obliteration of one's mental faculties in the flood of terror, and the subsequent shutdown of the crumbling mind.
Though, you did do well here. Kudos.
This was okay. I don't really like gruesome or dark stories all that much, and with Slenderman, I'd prefer to play the game. But you still did a good job. I didn't see any errors that were too noticeable, so that means that you're getting better.
Music. Listen to it.
2507833 O...K? I don't get it.
2513773 It goes with the story.
2514530 Huh. Interesting...
2518553 I don't get why you're so confused...
2029335 So... the Slenderman/mane has some sort of psionic field of pure horror? It then drives you insane with it... Very efficient...
Slenderman right now slendermane is supposed to spear people now ponies on tree branches
So I've been thinking... when I get better at writing stories, I'm going to rewrite this and make it longer and better. But for now, this is what you get.