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This is WAY better than anything I could've done.
Nice job! 
1911137
Thanks!
You go back and forth a few times between present and past-tense, and you have ever so few grammar issues, but overall, a cute little story that reads just like one of those silly Penthouse letters.
1911507
I'll try to correct that in the future. Thanks for the input.
Fantastic. The kind of porn fit for print.
The story is good,but your rushing a bit two fast.
Try to built up a momentum...And hit that clop button.
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Oh and this too.
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That one is just Celestia saying I came.... Harder than I should have actually...
1955261
I'll try to publish the next story as soon as I can. I'm not the fastest writer, unfortunately.
I know it seems like it, but I haven't forgotten about this story. I just have trouble writing on a fixed schedule. I'll try to finish the next story as soon as I'm able.
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Schultz?! What are you doing here? Aren't you supposed to be watching Colonel Hogan?!