• Published 6th Jan 2013
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Playmare Presents: - Lunar_Twilight

A seemingly innocent invitation to hang out after work leads two mares to something far more erotic.... (Finished)

Playmare Presents: written by Lunar_Twilight
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frgreen
frgreen #1 · Jan 6th, 2013 · · ·
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This is WAY better than anything I could've done. :twilightsmile: Nice job! :pinkiesmile::rainbowkiss::raritywink::scootangel::twilightsmile::yay::derpytongue2::pinkiehappy::ajsmug::ajsmug:

YukoAsho
YukoAsho #3 · Jan 6th, 2013 · · ·
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You go back and forth a few times between present and past-tense, and you have ever so few grammar issues, but overall, a cute little story that reads just like one of those silly Penthouse letters. :pinkiesmile:

Lunar_Twilight
Lunar_Twilight #4 · Jan 6th, 2013 · · ·
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1911507
I'll try to correct that in the future. Thanks for the input.:twilightsmile:

anAngryHamster
anAngryHamster #5 · Jan 6th, 2013 · · ·
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Fantastic. The kind of porn fit for print.

Schwarzwald
Schwarzwald #6 · Jan 6th, 2013 · · ·
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The story is good,but your rushing a bit two fast.:moustache:

Try to built up a momentum...And hit that clop button.

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