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Twilight Sparkle has stumbled across the Death Note in her belongings, a book of Death. Dropped by the Death God Varedon, it is a note book that can kill people by writing their name.Pressured by the Death God to write names in the Death Note, Twilight is pushed to the edge. Will she listen to the Death God or do whats right?

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I can't decide if I want to read this........ I don't want to shed any :eeyup:manly tears..

*wonders if she will kill the Great and Powerful Trixie*

MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!

hmmm.. any one else thinks this sounds like that one anime series called "death note" ? :rainbowhuh: but oh even if it does, it needed to be ponified!!

140733
Thank you captain obvious, you saved the day!

140753

always here to do my job miss! -flys off into the distance-

140733
No duh! Every anime should be ponified... okay, maybe not EVERY anime.

140838

now that I think of it, your right! it certaintly would be an entertaining set of stories, and probably very funny! :rainbowlaugh:

Glad you guys like it <:)
I didnt think anyone would:twilightsmile:

Wait I wonder does this work on alicorns! *evil grin and laugh*

Mitebcool.

I'm interested in how the story will go, but get some proofreaders, stuff like "thanked so much" doesn't sit well with most folk.

141390 I do have a proof reader lol, he should've caught that for me >.> do you mind telling me? <:) where you found it. that would be ever so nice of you.:twilightsmile:

-throws money at screen-
Why u no take :applecry:

Definitly looking forward to more :3 5 stars

141417 thank you :)
hey i actually haven't written to much in my life, i'm more of an art guy XD but i really enjoy writing too. But is there anything i should work on? :yay:

140362 itlle be a great ending, its okay :yay:

No offense but there's already a Death Note story with a similar setup that's been going on for as long as I can remember. Did you draw inspiration from that?

141537

there are so many things that would be wrong with that... so many, many things... :facehoof:

141574There is!? I had no idea there was another one.....
Should i stop making these then? I felt so orginal....:fluttercry:

141574i just checked it out, no mine is an entirely different story. that one "death note equestria" follows more of the anime. mine is all original story line. the only things that are from the anime are the actual death note. i even made up my own shinigami/ death god. with an original name, Varedon. in the other one, twilight brings judgment on them with the death note. in mine the death god varedon forces Twilight to use the death note. so i think its fine if i still make mine, no?

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The original death note broke my heart.. I really hope this doesnt do the same.... Going to trust you and read this my friend.:unsuresweetie:

142130Well i cant promise it wont be sad.... But the end will make up for it

Oh hey, this exists. Of course, it's always Twilight who finds the Note, isn't it? :twilightblush:
Yeah, I was a little concerned at first, but from the looks of it this story is completely different from mine. You go right on ahead. I might track this just to see where you go with it. Best of luck. :twilightsmile:

I loved death note and I love sad stories so you have my support.

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