This is the story of the adventures of a warrior exiled to Equestria. Follow him on his path to discover great threats and the magic of friendship and love!
1: grammar. When a different person/pony speaks, you must start a new paragraph. 2: Spelling. 3: some personalities are off. 5: No..... Wait a minute- 4: INDENTS!! 5: very important, five. Don't let me eat pears. I HATE PEARS!
two words MASK POWERS
yeah the makuta(i always refereed to him by that title out of habit) HAS hit rock bottom SURELY he still has some powers?!!
I regret nothing
okay, some flaws.
1: grammar. When a different person/pony speaks, you must start a new paragraph.
2: Spelling.
3: some personalities are off.
5: No..... Wait a minute-
4: INDENTS!!
5: very important, five. Don't let me eat pears. I HATE PEARS!
(Obligatory Doctor Who reference.)
I practically grew up on Bionicle, and I have seen more "disturbing" mature content, so what's the big deal?