The Bad Dreams

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Phantom Shadow

Phantom Shadow #1 · Jan 24th, 2012 · · · The Madness Within ·

You are off to a fantastical start, my friend! I can't wait to read the rest!

Phantom Shadow

Phantom Shadow #2 · Jan 31st, 2012 · · · The Beginning of The End ·

Goodness, gracious! That was hard for me to read, man!
"Of all the worst things that could happen, this is THE WORST POSSIBLE THING!"
I wonder what the dreams could be that's driving all the ponies to suicide!
Can't wait to read more! Good luck, mate!

Rainbow warrior

Rainbow warrior #3 · Feb 10th, 2012 · · · The Madness Within ·

omg bro you've been holdin out on me, I thought this wasnt out yet imma read this now LIKE A BAWS!

Rainbow warrior

Rainbow warrior #4 · Feb 10th, 2012 · · · The Beginning of The End ·

alright, let it be known that i think this has EXTREME promise, meaning that if somethings were changed I would favorite this in a heartbeat as I LOVE murder/creepy/mental fanfics, dont know why, just love em' anyway, the one thing that this is *ahem* MAKE IT LONGER, I love this idea, a bad dream that causes a pony to commit suicide one by one? That's brilliant! But I want details; the gruesome, bloody, slopping wet details that make me quiver in my bed whilst reading a horror fic. I love the idea bro and I love the name, i knew this was gonna be a good fic just by the title and I BARELY read fics as I enjoy writing them more but I checked yours out because 1. you've been a real good friend and 2. I know I've said this before but i LOVE murder, something that'll make me shit bricks as I read it. And this is something that I like but I just need details, I don't want another "scootabuse" as that was just a poem practically that could've EASILY been made into a series or if not a 15000 word book. In short; LOVE the idea love the things you've given me so far but I NEED MOAR!