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What is left after revenge

Initially wrote in french by myself on a french bronies' forum, this story tells Applejack's quest for revenge on the responsibles for her family's state, while her friends try to prevent her from wasting her life. And thus began a long journey around Equestria, filled with sadness and mysteries....

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Xevion21

Xevion21 #1 · Dec 31st, 2012 · · ·

This is a good story and a great idea with really good potential, but it looks like it was ran through Google translate to convert it from French to English. It is somewhat hard to read since some of the wording is weird. Don't get me wrong here, I am not saying anything bad, just, maybe get someone to go through it once it is in English to make the wording make more sense. I understood what it was saying, fixing the wording in my head as I went really easily, but I don't know how many others it would come to as easily. I like this so far however and will follow you to see how this ends.

Usui

Usui #2 · Dec 31st, 2012 · · ·

Indeed, I used Google translate a bit (a lot ) to help me because even if I'm can handle english, some of the words I used were very hard to find. I used as well unilingual dictionnary to run trough this translation. The fact is that I try to stay accurate to my original text , which is still running for now, with 14 chapters increasingly long.