Spitgear and her brother, Wind-Fire are two stable ponies sent out into the wasteland by their stable's Overmare to make contact with any post war remnants of Stable-Tec. The civilized stable ponies, thrown out into the wasteland must adapt to their new savage land, and deal with the betrayal by their old stable home.
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I was thinking of making a similar fic to this before i saw this. About twin brother and sister that are irseperatable, Taking place in the lower region of equestria.
But other than that, for the first chapter, this looks pretty good,well off to read da next chapter...
1883251 thanks for reading
and sorry for stealing your Idea
Oh nuuu D: but now that brings up the question, what is the social experiment for that vault? I guess we'll find out soon...
1883648 Ah, thanks for reminding me.
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1923675 are your jimmies rustled?
1926742 yeah, i know the chapters are short, sorry. I've been tired lately, which doesn't help my short attention span.
also, what confused you?
Another good chapter, yaaaaaaaaaaaay
Snazy chapter....
1947372 ah, but the whole thing is set up to be one wad of awkward meandering through the wastes, i havent decided if any of them will hook up, but there shall be a lot of bitch slapping
oops, accidentally published chapter 11 too early
And sorry for any long delays between chapter, I suddenly find myself very... VERY busy.
2101823 And I defenatley take all the feedback I can, thanks
So yeah, I believe I'm at a good stopping point to try and figure out what to do next, I have point A and point B, but I'm trying to think of more events leading up to that. I'm open to any suggestions.
In the mean time, I think I'll go back and do some rewriting. Rewritten chapters will be named, not just numbered. Hold on to your hat(s) 
its going to be a long week or so.
2120269 Thanks for that, with the rewrites, I'm trying to add detail, lengthen the chapters, and make my writing not seem as bad. Also, this is about 50 years before Littlepip, so yeah. I'm sorry about the time its taking me to do the rewrites. I bought Skyrim for PC, I've had TF2 Highlander to worry about and also some personal issues that have me somewhat depressed. I might want to write a new chapter while I'm still really sad to transfer it into the story. It does have the sad tag after all. Might have something to do with the death of one or more of the followers. Still thinking.
Sorry for misleading you saying that im gonna do a rewrite, im too lazy for that, lots of bad shit going on in my life now, such as a catastrophic breakup nearing my fourth aniversary. Ive just now remembered i have a story to write. but now ive likely lost any readers i had. Coming out of severe depression i shall attempt to refind my place and continue on with the story. Fuck the rewrite, sorry regolit, all party are fags but rusty and boomer and yes, appleoosa was just because im fat and like to mooch from other peoples stories (just kidding, i havent read hardly any others so forgive me) but i need to regain momentum, its sad really, i cant remember what little bit ive written. Once more i apologize. I am a failure, but im not giving up that easily. Quality of writing will likely decrease while im getting my shit together.
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