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PrincessEclipse


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This is my first fanfic, so please don't be rude. Luna and Fluttershy shipping. Luna realizes that although many nights can be cold and lonely, some are worth saving. Luna and Fluttershy stargaze. DISCLAIMER
I DO NOT OWN MY LITTLE PONY OR HASBRO.

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Comment posted by PrincessEclipse deleted Dec 29th, 2012

Well...
That was rather abrupt. =/

I really don't know what to say. What is there is good but there was no room for me to grab and no time for me to feel the build up. Maybe that was how it was meant to be. Maybe I'm just writing more than I should. Maybe.

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Not hay bacon, just bacon? *Runs off and counts the pigs* If the Stare works on alicorns we're about to find out:flutterrage:

Seriously though, it's a strong showing for a first fic.

It's not just you. Yeah, I know it was abrupt but I really couldn't think of anything else and later I am probably going to come back and completely change it. No, I think it is good to have build up, but I'm not exactly good at writing so....yeah. :derpytongue2:

Cute and cozy one story.

Luna dear, you seem to be in this one.
O YAY, it's about time we found one. Who did they pair me with?
Fluttershy... This is going to be interresting.
O GOD Please tell me it's not a clop fic. I cant handle another clopfic between me and Flyttershy.
.... Nope, it's rated everyone. Lucky, the only one with me was a brothel clopfic.
Don't you remeberr the last one with a lunashy? it was that one with the dream amulet.
SHUT UP. We said we would never speak of that again. You all know I would never do that to another pony.
Purple, You have only been with us for 20 minutes and I'm already considering killing you, Please don't antoganize my daughters.

It's still good.:ajsmug:
Keep at it.

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