On earth there is a era of meta humans a team called voltage has been in a battle on deaths door but hellex the moon knight has grab a person who appears to be his sister and use a secret art of mage call moonlight and gust of bright light came out and hellex was no longer on earth....but on a new world on a land called equestria in a crater and the first to find him was applejack. what will happen now ?
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The first "chapter" is an amiable description of what I thought while reading through your story's description.
1868267 you funny man bro hoof
no just just jus- just NO!!!!!!!!!!! Luna is best pony i stopped in the middle just thinking of what embarrassment shall happen to this human with Luna.
Your writing Is confusing but buck up and keep trying comrade
1869342 Keep reading friend Oh and he is a meta-human not really 100% human
1869357 Thank you friend keep reading
So what sequel maybe or some vodka or both
1873213maybe
Then you comrade deserve vodka
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thenk you
Girls, come here. You are both in this story, but it doesn't look good from some of the comments.
Why is their a picture of Nightmare Moon in the character's list... NO. DON'T CHANGE ME BACK
Calm down Luna, we won't let that happen again.
Not to be a bitch or anything, o wait, yes I do mean to be a bitch. The discription sounds like Blue Thunder.
I've had enough of this *Brief acton sequence* There, Purple is dead, now we can all go on with our lives... although the discription does look suspicously familyer.
I must investigate. Celestia, get my hat.
Mother... you don't have a hat. You never had a hat.
Thanks for ruining the moment.
1877835
huh?
1877845Ignore them. it's been a long night.
1877849
i dont get it
Usualy I just add these things to the read later list and read them when I am in the mood, But this sounds familyer to a story Written by Blue Thunder called Blue Thunder. I'm not calling it a ripoff as there are alot of diffrences, but it has the same Ideas. I am curious to see how you tackled this project.
1877865I dont know blue thunder what is it a movie?
1877857 were a bunch of voices comming out of one computer program, what's not to get. I am Midnight. Then threr is Luna and Celestia, My daughters. And there was Purple but she was destroyed because of the fact she never had anything nice to say.
1877877 No, it is a fan fic written by my split personality Blue Thunder. Two humans, one evil and trying to destroy the world and one good trying to save it, fight untill the evil one sets off a black hole device, swallowing the world. the origional blast was powerful to rip a hole in space and blast the two humans into limbo. Luna was observing the solar system at the time of the event and wittnessed the death of every human. She could feel the presence of two and pulled them towards Equestria. They blasted through another hole in space and landed in a deasert outside of Equestria, in a crater. Their bodies had been transformed by Luna's touch while they were in limbo. After being rescued their minds were wiped and they were stuck in an orphanage.(Their bodies were new and so had assumed the shape of colts) You can see where some of the similiarities in the discription are.
Stop, just stop.
But this is so cool. I took his powers.
Dear god make it stop. You just had to include her didn't you. She hasn't SHUT UP since the beginning of the story.
Your just jealous because we can't find a story for you that makes you awesome.
Please just kill me....
1878014
ok
Ummm, the plot was amazing
The story was amazing but it felt extreamly rushed. The lines bleed together and it was ofter confusing to read in the earlier chapters. You need to find someone to proof read this. But othen then that it was a great story. Luna would like to comment but I have magiced both of their lips shut to spare myself the grief and shame. Celestia is having a dirty joke day and Luna is still talking about herself in the story...
That's what he saidmhhhmmmh
1878109 Oh thnks I guess and tell Luna no hard feelings
This story needs some serious revision and editing, the game and everything sucks, it would be a good story if you could understand what exactly is happening