Discord has done it. In all of the eons he has existed, he is the only one of his kind to complete the task. Are you asking that there are more draconneqqui? Well, yes and no. Even so, he has finally completed his greatest game ever, and he's not just going to unleash it on Equestria, no, that would be too simple, and as we all know, Discord just loves disorder.
Finn, Jake, and their friends and enemies are going to be in for a REAL surprise...
My first fic, and MAY GET DARK in later chapters. This has NOTHING TO DO with 'Adventure Time in Equestria!' by ImJustAnotherBrony. There may be a chance of non-canon shipping, but if I put it in there, it won't be too big. Takes place after the season 3 premier. The first part is just a little test of my abilities to write philosophically and also allows you to get ready for the fic itself. Rated teen for slight adulterated content. -BV.
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i DONT CAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARE!!!!!!!!!!!! I WANT MOOOOOOORE CHAPTERS!!!!!!!!!!
Not lazy, just away from a true keyboard. My writing is slow, and I can't write on a tablet, as I can't scroll down. Forgive me, and I'll tell you weird facts that few people know.
I READ THIS TWO WEEKS AGO! GIVE MEH MORE FIRETRUCKING CHAPTERS OR I WILL HIDE IN YOUR BED AND HAVE BARNEY BITE YOUR FRIGGIN BUTTCHEEK OFF! I DO NOT LIE I JUST THREATEN PEOPLE WHO ARE LAZY!
1945125>>1945125>>1945011 Not lazy, just not near a nice computer. Tablets suck for writing, I can never scroll down. Forgive me, and I'll tell you weird facts of the world.
1945011 As an unwelcome example, by trying to revise my comment, I replied to myself twice. Sometimes fingers suck, I wish they'd give working styluses (styli?) for tablets.
1871208 EXCUSES!!!!!!!!!!!!
A GOOD STORY DOES NOT STOP SIMPLY IN THE CENTER! AND IF YOU CAN NOT SCROLL DOWN HOW CAN YOU COMMENT AND REPLY!
1945159 Tablets suck and excuse me for my yelling in previous comments
anyway so sorry for the whole ordeal
it was that time of the month for me
1945177 ERMAGERD! ER GERL!
I meant the little writing box where you actually write the story doesn't scroll down. I agree, tablets suck and I'm a closet brony, so... the computer is usually out of my range. I may actually have luck tonight as I may have access to my mother's laptop. Just remember this, the next chapter will not be posted tonight, that is a fact, not a prediction.
I'm still learning to type however as the hunt and peck method used to work great, but now that I have an actual novel in the works and this, it wasn't going so well.
Oh, do you want a small spoiler for the next chapter?
1945249 SPOILERS ARE AWSOME! Go on......
1945412 Discord isn't the only one of his kind. There are others littered throughout the different multiverses. This is actually a relatively small spoiler as I mentioned Discord's brother, Demolition, in the first chapter. And truth be told, Discord is not very powerful compared to his family..
I'm also thinking of making another crossover fic, but as a music crossover with the song Handelbars by the band Flobots. It will be good.
1945504 yay
hopefully when the next chapter comes out i wont have blood coming from my
yeah not gonna finish the sentence, there are kids on this website
1945531 Kids? Pfft. Screw them (I'm not a pedophile, I'm serious). I'm bored, wanna flame war over something that doesn't really need to be?
1945544 sure why not?
1945566 Since you're a girl..
Women have better lives than men now.
Think about it, right now, it's only sexist when men do it, and girls actually get to be creative when picking out clothes. Especially for formal occasions.
All men get to do is find a tux that doesn't make you sweat.
It's always guys that have to go after the girl, not the other way around.
Girls are more wordly, and have better communication skills.
You can multitask better than us.
Guys have, you know, a sensitive... oh screw it we have balls of glass.
Girls almost always have better 'fun time' with guys, as they can go multiple times in a row.
The only good things men have left now are (usually) superior strength and analytic reasoning. That's why you never see women in movies making immoral choices.
GIRLS HAVE THE WEAPON OF FLEXIBILITY AND LONG FINGERNAILS.
Our lives suck.
1945628 i get this alot
the days for me are frustrating
its not only men
remember when you were a kid and the girls had this little fort where boys were not allowed and they did girly shit like paint thier nail
yeah thats sexism
although what you say could be debated on TV i just dun give a rats ass
and with the cloths its a damn curse i say! simple men where tuxes nowadays and girls have closets full od clothes to choose from
my little sister got lost in my older sister's first closet when she was cleaning it! I can't get up in the morning without saying to her "DONT GO IN THE CLOSET OR YOULL DIE BECAUSE I'LL SECRETLY FEED YOU JELLYFISH!" i have to wake up an hour before i have to get ready just pick out my clothes!
1945871 oh and im no good at communication other than typing cuz ppl dun see my face
1945875 Okay. The flame war is over. You took too long, and I am tired as
Wasn't that fun?
1945906 yash
i feel like drinking monster energy and spending all night watching pinkie pie
1945906 FLAME WAR!? Dammit I missed it again!
1953930
CRAZY SHIPPING POWERS ACTIVATE. I CALL UPON FINN SHIPPED WITH DISCORD. TAKE THAT!
1961651 Yeeeaaaahhhh... That's not gonna happen. The shipping is mostly put in there as a bit of a comedic moment while Finn's face turns red and he shies away thinking 'that's so gross!' While the two unnamed ponies make out in front of him. I never said this story wasn't without comedy did I? Just wait untill the fun part with PB and Pinkie Pie..
Shipping knows no bounds.
Also visit my crazy shipping YouTube channel. D3cartoons. Naw it's not crazy shipping just bronies and fathers.
1962048 SPAMMER!!
Heh.. yeah.
Lol, banana.
This review is brought to you on behalf of the group: Authors Helping Authors
Name of Story: The True Beginning
Grammar score out of 10: 9 no serious grammar errors I noticed.
Pros: It has a unique idea of crossing over Adventure Time with MLP. Is has Discord in it and he's a favorite of mine. It has potential to be a real good story.
Cons: The Royal Sister are not twins, in MLP cannon Luna is younger than Celestia, even before her banishment. Beemo is not a walking gameboy. The first chapter seemed a tad wordy, but has since gotten better.
Notes: You have a unique idea of a Crossover that doesn't cross into the totally absurd and a good reason for the Crossover. The story like I said has potential to be very good, the key is taking your time. The cons aren't that bad I'm just big on cannon and had a tough time finding bad things. It got alittle drawn out in the second chapter but kept us interested enough to keep us reading.
Enjoy your review! Please help me out by looking at my story: http://www.fimfiction.net/story/58543/chrysalis-revenge
Thanks and keep up the good work!
2013541 Alrighty. I shall fix the thing about the twins and the 'walking gameboy' was only because I couldn't think of any other word that would fit there. Expect a review sometime soon on your story. And, if you could, if you send me the URL, could you please make it a hyperlink? I'm on a tablet, so I can't really copy and past the address.
Again, thanks, and you can expect a review quite soon.
2014679
Revenge
There ya go
2014737 Thanks.