There's something odd about Dr Whooves - and something odd about the local statues. Twist thinks she wants to know why.
The answers will cost more than she knows.
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Don't Blink.
Blink and you're dead.
Edit: Wait, wtf? Was that Twists reaction to a human, or was it a monster? Weird...
1862305 But if you don't blink, it gets into your eyeballs.
Basically, you're just bucked.
1862319 Just don't look them in the eye, and you're fine.
Not Bad, not bad indeed.
It was really good same with the ending!
I am thinking of a story simallar like this. but I am not inspired.
But I am still making a story simallar to this story.
review:
8/10
I didn't really understand MUCH of it I understanded a lot of it but a little I had no clue of some sentces said
Your story was worth a like and a comment but not a fav.
But anyway your story was great!
But I enjoyed it and I kinda hope there will be a sequal to your story.
It was really nice to read.
I am thinking this story is a bit of a horror story
But good work making it!
an utterly bizarre ending.
well done.
Well, that wasn't the ending that I thought was being set up. Interesting subversion there.
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Yeah, I got the feeling that's why a third of the Like/Dislikes are Dislikes* (and there aren't much of either) - people came in expecting a Who-style story and then got... something else, that they definitely weren't after. Which is good, that's what I wanted!
* Or it could just not be that good really but LET ME HAVE MY PRIDE.
This as just confusing as I was sort of given the impression the Doctor did something to her which made little sense as she was fairly harmless and even was hurt by the angels. Not thumbing t down but not thumbing up either, just kinda confused.
3614031 Fic may not have been that clear in retrospect then - my idea was to set up everyone to think this was Doctor-versus-Weeping-Angels-in-Equestria and then, whoops, no, Whooves is actually a Lovecraft thing (and is responsible for the attacks on Twist to try and avoid being uncovered); the statues are looking for him.
3614161 ...I'm so sorry I *totally* didn't get that. Twist was never directly attacked til the end and the thing with her mother very much felt like a weeping angel thing.
Hello! Have a review. I didn't pick up on the Lovecraftian thing, so I read it pretty much straight. A really interesting choice of leading ponies (not sure I've ever seen Twist and the Doc before) and I liked the way reality didn't quite stay put. Creepy certainly, but unfortunately a bit choppy in the writing, and that ending makes little sense unless you realise what's happening.
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It's good, just kinda of ambiguous.
It doesn't help that you are using pretty fixed lore in the Dr Who canon, so people expect there to be a obvious explanation, and there isn't one (at least not one that can be explained readily).
I'm still not sure what the Statues are, if not Weeping Angels. Still a great story though.