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Do not like the last part with the soul thing, too much Gary Stu for my taste. The fight on the other hand was very good.
1898164 hmm... i planned something different in the beginning, but that would've been even more gary stu like, that's why i threw that away. Originally, planned for him to break Raritys' neck before she dies, because he could only resurrect people when they didnt accept their fate.
Then i thought, that resurrecting someone everywhere is kinda op and takes the feels away from deaths. On top of that i went through with this idea to make him less Gary Stu. You will see in future chapters what i mean.
Btw i thought Gary Stus were totally "Yeah im overpowered and i will do everything for everyone" people. I mean Aren is more like an ashole than a really good guy. He never reacts with humor, is always serious and when someone talks to him, he acts more like he is talking down to that person. Luna is not really wrong with her oppinion of him.