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Nice ,but what is the plan if they can't kill him. Turn him into stone?
Also I don't like that Celestia is hiding information from the other it's like crystal empire all over again.
Overall good work!
1862568 Well that's for you to find out.
The whole reaction part about the incoming end of the world thing seems kinda strange to me. Its not like they will be locked up in Canterlot for the next five years without any outside contact they could have weekly visits or something to their families and stuff.
Rarity's first thought about the fact that the world as they know it may end in 5 years if they don't prepare is that she might get dirty?
Also they are the friggin elements of harmony they wont go out in the mud and try to buck someone in the face who can cut apart the entire royal guard without breaking stride then decapitate one of the princesses with a backhand swing and after that kill everyone in Equestria with barely any noticable effort. The elements fit more into the artillery role, they fire at and try to incapacitate the foe if they have the tactical advantage. This isn't like the Changeling invasion where there where hundreds of mooks to pound into the ground, it's more like the fight against Discord with one singular but extremely powerful opponent.
1862909 Yes yes i know. But if you recall, Rarity does not know that. For her it's just another old guy with the whole "yeah, I'm going to do something evil" business.
I will also not use them as "cannon-fodder" and Celestia also, does not want them in more danger, than they need to be in.
Now for the reactions. Well you have to take into consideration that they've been told that they will move out and have to forfeit some of their dreams. They are all just overreacting over that visit.
But still thank you for the feedback, I may change a little, based on that.