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Eagle Heart


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Creepy. I like it! Did notice a few errors, though: Reven's/Revan's name is inconsistent, and "gargoyale" should be spelled "gargoyle."

Also, I think it would've been a better idea to put the song at the top of the chapter. That way no one reads the entire thing before realizing, "Hey, I could have been listening to awesome music while reading this."

1852589 I have gotten complaints before about having a song at the beginning, so I was unsure whether I should or not. Also, the errors should be fixed right in a few seconds.

Your feedback is insanely appreciated.

Comment posted by Eagle Heart deleted Jan 13th, 2014
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