A story of what Luna went through when she banished away with the elements of harmony to the moon but ends up in a different world entirely.
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WhiteQuill
Just a new writer trying to contribute to the brony community.
WhiteQuill
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Ok, first things first. I really like the sound of the story, but the only problem is it moves sooo fast!
It's a good story, but you need to take your time with it, even if your overly ambitious and can't wait to post it up!
Oh wait, I just realized it was a one shot
Still, it moved way to fast even for a one shot!
2228587 Thanks for the feedback xD I was on a trip to Australia and found myself having a lot of free time so I ended up writing this on my iPod...I got it proof-read but I guess I would say there are some elements of the story that are debatable and could have been better.
Appreciate the comment though :) /)
2228675 Well you should definitely keep writing fics bro! Just keep 'em at a steady pace
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NYES.
2228686 Thanks! I'd never thought I'd get this kind of reception
I'm currently working on another but school work is getting in the way.
But I will try to upload more
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2230190 G'aahhh! Schoolwork! Every young writers weakness
Well, can't wait to see what you have next! Keep in touch and let me know whenever it gets released
2230251 Sure! I might not be up to your expectations though...
Good Story Yeah~
2233127 Ahh no worries, we all have a starting point
I still don't consider myself that great of a writer either! I'll help you along the way if you ever need it. 
2233169 Thanks! xD