• Published 24th Dec 2012
  • 1,888 Views, 81 Comments

Amnesia: Forget Your Past - TheDarkOne234



Agrippa promised Daniel a way out, so he chucked the head into the portal. Now Daniel must try and redeem himself and stop Alexander again.

Comments ( 12 )

Loved the whole story, great job :twilightsmile::twilightsmile:

That was literally the BEST Amenesia story I have ever read. That was great!

Very good! Liked the conclusion! Only qualm I have is with Twilight doing what she does like that. :flutterrage:

Either way, looking forward to whatever else you may put out, cheers! :twilightsmile:

I don't even know what to say.
This was, oh my god this was good.

It was like having a cake and eating it. Thank you, thank you so much for this awesome story!:yay:

1933302 1933861 1935607 1936567 I am glad to have provided a story that you guys loved! Thanks for the support!

Sequel, please.

1937529 I'll think about it. The sequel probably won't have some intricate plot to it, but will likely be what happens to Daniel afterwards.

Comment posted by Guilded Crown deleted Jan 11th, 2013

1937590 You better give me a sequel, you don't want to know what will happen if you don't :pinkiecrazy:
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and then I'll be like
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just kiddin you don't have to if you don't want. Don't hurt me! :fluttershbad:

I remember first discovering the reason that Daniel took the Amnesia potion. The themes of redemption and dark pasts are over-used in video games, but to Daniel... He needed redemption, and in the land of Equestria, he can find peace.
It would be interesting to see him write a journal of his time in Equestria. You have already shown the ability to match his writing style and vocabulary with ease.

1940628 Also, I like that idea. There will probably be a sequel, and might be in the form of a journal. The only thing about that is it limits what you can write about. I'm pretty sure that no matter who you are, you can't remember every word an event that happened in the past day. Notes or letters written will definately be included, but the sequel as a whole will probably be in third person.

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