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The Sound of Laughter

Twilight decides that they should learn about each other's past lives before Rainbow Dash's Sonic Rainboom. Starting with Pinkie Pie's story and her life on a rock farm.

This is my first fanfic so constructive criticism is appreciated

Chapters (3)

Story Time · 21st Dec 2012 · 1,056 words
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The Dog and Rock Show · 20th Jan 2013 · 2,282 words
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Giggle at the Ghosties · 22nd Apr 2013 · 2,512 words
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Vespa luctuosa

Vespa luctuosa #1 · Jan 20th, 2013 · · · Story Time ·

Hello!

Nice story. I read the first chapter and I'll be sure to read the second chapter later. It's a good start and a nice idea. You've got a good idea of the characters behaviour in most cases and I'm quite interested to see what happens next.

' “Ugh, now I have to reschedule with the others now” '
You wrote 'now' twice in the same sentence. Is this a mistake, perhaps?

Mr Stargazer