After the events of Portal 2, GLaDOS takes up a new hobby. Testing ponies.
Pinkie Pie breaks the Fourth Wall, bringing them to this universe where ponies are tested at Celestial Science. Will they survive testing and make it to the cake? Oh, and Chell is here too!
I am not as good at Portal, as I am at Minecraft, so let's see where this goes.
P.S. You need to have played Portal 1 and 2 or you will be incredibly confuzzled!
So, for those of you who are my followers, you might remember a blog post I made a few days ago. It had a story idea about Pinkie Pie breaking the Fourth Wall so much that the universe blew up. That story idea, somehow turned into this.
seems legit.
Ohhhh, I hate reading unfinished fanfics, but I just NEED to read this. I'll be back when I'm done!
Ok, the story is good, but the way it written, it seems to go a bit too... fast.
Things just happen to quickly.
Also, I didn't really get this bit. ' "I think I can answer that." Rainbow said. She cleared her throat. "He probably drifted too close to Equestria's atmosphere, and fell. As to how he survived that fall? HE'S MAGICAL!" '
But the story is good, I'm currently doing a Portal/Pony fic too. Good job!
well this is a good story
this crossover is now 20% coo,ler
SEEMS LEGIT SEEMS LEGIT
of course it is legit
this might be kind've a problem because if chell survived and is still there then something is not right
but its still pretty good
1832193 How is something not right if Chell survived? At the end of Portal 2 GLaDOS let Chell go, because she was too hard to kill.
yes but why is she back in the facility
in the end she leaves for good>>1833146
in the end of the game to be exact
1833189 How can i explain what I was thinking? For the ponies, it's an alternate universe, and for the Portal characters they were teleported there for no real reason, and Chell just happened to be teleported to Celestia science. Make sense? Doesn't quite make sense to me...
1833221 if it doesn't make sense to you it doesn't make sense at all
but ok then whatever you say
ps. make ratman appear
1833297 ratman???
you know the guy who freed shell and was the origonal test subject
if you didn't know look him up on youtube type in
portal 2 ratman 1833391
1833406 1. If by guy, you mean Wheatly?
2. you spelled Chell, shell.
1833422 thanks for telling me about my mispells and when say guy i mean a human not that wheatley i literally mean an actual living human
he is also a rumor in portal 1& 2 where you can find his secret dens
1833437 OH! You mean the 'cake is a lie' guy.
1833458 now your getting who im talking about
>> :D Maybe I will include him. But idk.
1831633 Fast? The Sonic Rainboom is fast! Sorry, was thinking about that all day.
I can't leave you guys hanging like that. Expect another chapter tonight.
These are quite short.
Good story, though.
1838463 I dislike writing long chapters. But thanks bro, I try.
1838488 Your chapters are about my length, actually. I keep mine around 500 words, and sometimes 1000 if I'm in a creative mood.
Interesting
I don't know if I want to find out what happens next
1838561 He's dead.
FIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIRST!
1841030 First is the worst, second is the best.
cool story
1841168 Thanks!
me before reading:
ah,cool.portal
me when reading comments:
SO MANY SPOILERS
no worries,i finished the games anyway
me when tipeing this
:,)
epic story dude
1842077 Thank you very much! No offense, but your lack of capitalization is bugging me xD
Oh god... I needed to share this with you guys.
1842247
Oh,ok.Im kind of new at tiping,and im not used to putting caps after every sentence.
1846912 And there are no spaces in that first sentence you just typed.xD
umm... a few things so far, although I do really, REALLY, enjoy the story,
1. It's Wheatley (not Wheatly)
2. It's REALLY fast paced.
But, yeah, it's still a really good story, though!
LOL
hello
pew pew pew pew pew pew pew pew pew pew pew pew pew pew pew pew pew pew pew pew:pinkiegasp
WHY U NO LISTEN TO WHEATLEY TWI?
LOL
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Head should roll if not this is dissapointing
HAPPY HEADS DID ROLL!!!!
Too BAD? I WAS HAPPY
YYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS THEY DIED!!!! FINALY OMG IMA SO AHAPPY!!!
1863809 What the heck is wrong with you?
1863823 IDK
I knew someday Pinkie's abilities would get the mane 6 into trouble
1838488
Hey i know you like short chapters. I do too. but could you make the stories longer?
1911106 Absolutely not. Just kidding. Depends on if I feel like I can make it longer. And there is a sequel to this as well.
I'm sad about Twilight, if only because we have a lot in common. We are both very brainy, for one thing.
1911128 Well she should not have used the Portal Gun.