A Day In Each Others Hooves

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ProStoryteller

ProStoryteller #1 · Dec 25th, 2012 · · · The First Steps Are Always The Hardest ·

Very good story keep up the good work

SkyeChaser

SkyeChaser #2 · Jan 9th, 2013 · · · The First Steps Are Always The Hardest ·

AWESOME. PLEASE CONTINUE.

I like the depth you have given the story, the problems, the traumas. I really enjoyed this first chapter and BEG you to finish this thing. I will continue to read it until the end and comment every single chapter. Thanks for writing this.

OnTheTrot

OnTheTrot #3 · Jan 9th, 2013 · · · The First Steps Are Always The Hardest ·

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That you good colt I am glad by story has brought joy to someone

SkyeChaser

SkyeChaser #4 · Feb 23rd, 2013 · · · Finding Your Balance ·

Once again an amazing chapter. I really like this story so far but I have a concern how common are aneurism actually? Doesn‘t it have side-effects?

OnTheTrot

OnTheTrot #5 · Feb 23rd, 2013 · · · Finding Your Balance ·

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Yes good sir in all reality they can offer some mental distability such as with AppleJack's body now reacting the way that it does. sometimes they can be over exposed vains that burst and depending where in the brain can be a need for surgrey as it can sometimes flood the brain. But i myself have had an aneurism (two accutally) one was from helping my farther lift a cabinet into his van being asmatic. my body can't handle stress for to long and when i got to point of lifting it over my head a vessel just burst. luckly there were no side affects. And another was at the loss of my grandparent shortly after their deaths my brother becoming addicted to heroin my father drinking to the point of hospitilation and my mother on anti- depressants. And many other things my mind just sort of snapped one day i got so angry i kicked my door through and then pop my eye bled and so did my nose before i passed out. i woke there days later in hospital luckily i didn't need surgery but there is a dot in my eye that is continuaslly red and it waters most of the time the doctor said it was a broken nerve. So you see good sir i was luckly not to have needed surgery but something like my first one are something that rainbow dash would mostly like shrug off. the dot in my eye has faded from when it happened 1 year ago but it will always be there. They are as common as you let them to be, they will alway be present if you always find reason that is why i'm a very happy go lucky person which is why i like being crazy and stupid for the sake of no worries. And i sort of just encorpertaed it into this story so to say. I hope that anwsers you question but if you have more just reply to this comment

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OnTheTrot

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