I will be GLAD to edit stories, as long as they're not mature!
Discord, having overthrown Equestrian royalty, finds sitting fat and happy on a throne all day isn't what it's cut out to be. He promptly begins a fighting arena and anypony with a cutie mark must fight at some time. Outrages begin and Discord's 'playthings' may or may not escape.
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Moar! Is that enough constructive criticism?
In all seriousness, I loved it. I can't wait to see how the fight against Rainbow Dash will turn out. I also want to see what other ponies Discord has captured and forced to fight one another. Terrific job!
Also, nice Scissor Sisters reference.
>> Vehemence
Okay honestly, the chapter is almost done but I'm trying to make it sound like Quill and Rainbow Dash haven't met before instead of 'hey yo imma kill you kay'. Cliches are easy to make but hard to correct.
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Agreeing with Vehemence here, Moar!! O.O
It's really good so far and I'd love to see a fight seen in the next chapter ^-^
keep it up!
meh... and that's how next weeks episode ended... spoilers
Man, i'm s-serouly scared right now
I';m FREAK'in OUt man Help me FREAK'in OUt!
Don't need to apologize for the scissor sister's reference, and I don't think you need to if you just keep it to the small detail then teen's fine ^-^ Keep it up! Loving it so far!
Just keep the teen rating. A little bit of gore is ok for teen, so I wouldn't worry about it. My story contains graphic scenes of severing of limbs and the contorting and mangling of pony anatomy, but I still keep it teen.