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Holy...
JESUS...
BALLS!!!
TWI GOT BITCHSMACKED!!
Yep..
I'ma read this over again.
Great chapter though!
I love this chapter! Yelling at fillies and slapping hot purple mares is Johns special talent.
3250220>>3249110 Geez, you two sure like violence towards poor Twilight lol
3250038 Cut me some slack! That was ages ago!
3250626 I dun like violence towards Twilight, but i like violence towards bitchy Twilight.
3254670 Sorry if you don't like the way it went, I tried what I thought could work.
Mind you, the first story had only John and Twilight interacting, this one has more than them, and well, I had to adjust.
If you go ahead and drop it, I won't blame you.
...
Oh wow. I seriously did not expect to see John bitch slap Twilight. But like John said in his letter, sometimes, being nice just doesn't cut it. Sometimes you have to show others that you mean business when it comes to serious situations like them. Did John kind of go on the extreme side of things? Probably, but in a way, something like this needed to happen and for two reasons. Each reason pretaining to the two ponies that needed to have a message get through their thick skulls.
1. Twilight was wallowing in self pity and was starting to drag the others into the hole she was digging. John needed to let Twilight know, that he was not interested in taking part in her self pity and neither was he interested in having Twi drag her friends and Spike into it as well.
2. Diamond Tiara, as we all know, constantly bullies the C.M.C. for not having a cutie mark. Diamond needed to know that was absolutely not acceptable and that she NEEDED to learn some proper manners. Unfortunately, being spoiled tends to do that to individuals. Hopefully Diamond Tiara starts to learn how to properly treat other ponies.
Once again, you surprised me with something I did not expect to happen. So all in all, kudos to you!
Great chapter, sorry for the late post here, and as always, I look forward to your next update!
~ Super-Brony12
3300487 I'm glad you liked it
But it might be a bit slower, seeing how I'm actually working in two different story chapters at the moment -see new story and this one- and this one is much more difficult to write than the new one, since I have a lot to set up.
I'll try not to disappoint, though!
ok so when are you just going to have them kiss and tell each other how much they love each other.???
they just need to get a room for about a week and buck like bunny's.