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Ditzy seems too out of character.
3211240 Does she? I tried to get her to show some of her usual messing up with her being more comfortable around John and company due to some familiarity... Do tell what it is that you feel that is out of place and I'll give it a check!
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Hard to really say. I reread it a few times and I figured she came out as too aggressive. You used bold text and to me it sounded like she came off as aggressive or mean or something.
3211276 Bold text!? THAT might have been a mistake on my part.
EDIT: Oh, I'm guessing that wasn't really specific enough... That wasn't Ditzy, I'll fix it.
Ugh! Diamond Tiara. I really don't like that filly, mainly due to the fact that she is a spoiled brat.
Anyway, interesting chapter here. Even though there wasn't a whole lot that happened, it still sets us up for development. I will be waiting for the next chapter now.
~ Super-Brony12