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This is directed straight after my other fic, Hearts and Hooves day. Luna tells Derpy that she should probably go find Zecora and get a flower to make her hair look pretty, but on the way, she sees a shimmering mirage of a ghost pony that leads her into a strange town, and a suprising chain of events follow,,,
Please notify me if this should be rated Teen

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 10 )

Story of the Bad Story, Bad Version.

1744826 Hey dude, I'm new to this site and very much new to the concept of MLP fanfiction. Instead of insulting my story, you could give me suggestions on how to make it better. If you do not like my story, then don't comment at all.

1753134 Bronies are a nice community in general, but be warned the majority of people here are a bit grammar Nazi ish. No joke they will crush you.

1792860 Thanks for the warning :P I'm actually not a brony. I'm female, so I don't know what that makes me :P

1793227 Oh cool a fellow Pegasister. Female bronies are called Bronies sometimes to. It's like how all squares are rectangles, but not all rectangles are squares.

1795088 Are Pegasisters rare or something? xD That rectangle/square thing is funny.

This story is really cool x3 It doesn't completely copy the 'Story of the Blanks' but instead takes it to a whole new level! Good Job! :derpytongue2:

1793227 I am a pegasister too! Wow, I love this story. How long do you spend on your stories?

OooOOoOoh! Could you continue? I really want to see some more because this is amazing!

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