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And now for some rambling!
I could say this is my first MLP-fic. Not my first fanfic ever, but my first pony-related scribbling I published. I've got a bit of experience in writing, so you can be harsh on me. Just don't destroy me completely :3
I think that you may have noticed by now, that english isn't my native language. So my main concern is the grammar. Please, post any mistakes you find, and I'm also looking for someone who could spare time on checking my stories, whenever I happen to finish one. (It's not a stressful job, usually I take one month to write something, or even find and idea about what to write, so you can still live your average life next to it :3)
If someone happens to be interested in my sick person, I'll soon cough up some introduction blog post, with more info about myself.
Farewell, unlucky people who stumbled upon me. We'll meet again soon.
Not bad, but my curiosity makes me wonder why she was like that to begin with
Hey that was pretty good. I liked the words you chose in most of the sentences. Here was my favorite line:
However I agree with the other person up there saying we should know what happened to her in the first place. I think it would've built for a more emotional ending. Also I would fix some of the grammar mistakes in here such as the missing period in the second sentence.
This receives 1 fresh tomato.
1736120 that would be awesome, hopefully we do get some insight.
Even with the nature of the story I still loved it, I actually found the ending to be sweet in a way
OH. MY. GOD.
YESYESYESYESYES
2 watchers, 7 favourites and four comments in one day?
(Tell me I'm overreacting, but first you have to know this comes from a writer who only ever had one or two constant readers, and even those only read his stories because they were my friends :3)
1735888 That's correct, it was inspired by that. After seeing it for the first time, I couldn't get it out of my head, and soon, this little babby popped out :3
1735945>>1736120>>1736856 I would gladly answer your question, but the truth is that even I don't know. And I like it that way, I live in the belief that being obscure about stuff and leaving unnerving plotholes like that will make my writings deeper
But if you REALLY want an explanation, then I guess I can share a little something I made up a week after writing it: The protagonist (you) and Fluttershy wanted to get married, or have children, but the law forbid interracial procreation, because of biological reasons. Surgeries that would turn a pony into human, or vice versa were only freshly researched, and cost a fortune, so you had two choices: Live on with the knowledge that you probably reached the peak of your bond, or find an... unofficial way to match races. Needless to say, you chose the latter, and the worst possible thing happened.
Though, there's a problem with this version. As I described, you were like a guardian angel to Fluttershy, thus you obviously wouldn't have subjected her to the dangers of the operation.
About the grammar: Heavy Rains was such a gentleman that he did a proofread, and sent me an all-fixed version. I'll upload it right away.
And finally: Thank you all, who watched me, or watched, read, or commented on the story. You have no idea how much this means to me.
Shido out
1738768 Again, it was no trouble. I'm always willing to lend a
hoofhand to those who ask. Oh and I'm going to promote this story like crazy.1739036 Well, thank you once again, but be careful with the promoting, don't overdo it. It's not even one of my "actual" stories, this is just a random little novel, inspired by a "trauma" and written in 2 hours under the effects of mental exhaustion. And also it contains humans, human-pony shippings, and is a second person fic, so there are lots of hate-material here. I don't want too much attention.
But still, thank you for your kindness
1739935 Okie Dokie Lokey!
oh and... Annak ellenére, hogy Ön nem angol anyanyelvű. Nem volt kevés nyelvtani kérdéseket.
1740117 WHOA- WHA-
...Magyar kollégát tisztelhetek személyedben, or Google Translate? 
1740143 Tudom, hogy néhány magyar, de a legtöbb Google Translate. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/shrug_Twilight_Sparkle.png
1740158 Oh... I gues you have some Hungarian relatives...? How did you even know that I'm Hungarian?
1740170 Yeah my Grandfather lives in Békés county near Gyula and I saw your deviant page.
1740186 Well, it's good to see that even though you don't live on the plains of our itty-bitty little country, you still know a bit of language from your heritage.
1740204 Indeed, when one is brought up in America they tend to forget their past and exchange it for the vices of this country. Such a plight...
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YOU WATCHED MY LITTLE AMNESIA TOO, DIDN;T YOU?:D
1748542 TOTALLY, BRO, TOTALLY.
1750936
YUP! IT WAS GOOD~ /)
1751373 (\
Can't we just hug?
1763934 No, that wouldn't count as assaulting the reader mentally
OH DEAR GOD THE FEELS!