Dinky wants to go playing with her new friend, but it falls heavily on her mother. Derpy has always been her first and foremost playmate, but now that's changing.
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SO MOTHFUCKING CUTE
Aww what a nice story, simple and effective. Nicely done!
It gets distracting having the dialogue in italics, on the other hand it is overshadowed by such a sweet story.
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My apologies, I thought it would make it easier to read than the other stories. Do you have a better way of making dialogue stand out?
1746307 Why should it need to stand out? Just have it be normal.
1749220 I don't know. I think it's actually better readable if the dialogue stands out a bit. Anyway, thanks for the feedback, I appreciate it.
1749687 Well the way it is now it looks just awful. It would be far better to read if it were in fact normal.