Tavi n Scratch 14 31 10

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Tavi n Scratch's Stories (14)

My Dashing Hero
Celestia has asked Twilight to research the idea of heroism, leading to what is now remembered as the Mare Do Well incident, and much more.
5,481 words · 1,406 views · 233 likes · 14 dislikes
Sing Me to Heaven
Every week I go up to where she is and I play her a song, I just hope she can here me.
1,191 words · 521 views · 59 likes · 4 dislikes
Simply Love
We all wish Love could be simple.
1,015 words · 213 views · 31 likes · 2 dislikes
Letters From the Path of Loss
After the loss of someone near and dear to me, Princess Celestia recommended that I write a letter to my lost companion.
8,438 words · 691 views · 66 likes · 8 dislikes
All the Difference
3,290 words · 329 views · 35 likes · 6 dislikes
Clipped Wings
11,777 words · 715 views · 68 likes · 17 dislikes
Coda
1,107 words · 127 views · 18 likes · 2 dislikes
I Don't Know How to Deal With This
1,593 words · 610 views · 39 likes · 9 dislikes
Mini-Shelf: A Collection of Bite Size Stories
2,784 words · 206 views · 29 likes · 6 dislikes
The Voice of Music
5,788 words · 360 views · 27 likes · 6 dislikes

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Simply Love by Tavi n Scratch

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Romance Slice of Life

It's very simply a love story.

First Published
2nd Dec 2012

Last Modified
2nd Dec 2012

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Dunsparce

#1 · 24w, 3d ago ·

Wow. This tear-jerked Dunsparce, something that's not relatively easy to do! :raritycry:

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Dunsparce

#2 · 24w, 3d ago ·

Dunsparce thinks this deserves more views and thumbs up simply because of how thoughtful the author is.

Dusty Sage

#3 · 24w, 3d ago ·

I write romance novels, which is funny because I don't believe that I've ever been in love.

A hit, a palpable hit. :yay:

Ice

#4 · 24w, 3d ago ·

Wow, this is a new one. I've never seen a fic being done like this (Except maybe "Celestia") and it's a nice change of pace. Little to no errors when it comes to grammar just a bit short. 8/10

Cereal

#5 · 24w, 3d ago ·

Short and eloquent. I liked it. Well done.

vinnycentp

#6 · 24w, 3d ago ·

:pinkiesad2:

Well written, take your time next time if you do something like this again.

Maybe even put some mor important events before the proposal, like a memorable night at a restaurant .

ImperfectXIII

#7 · 24w, 3d ago ·

So short. So simple. And dammit all to hell, so brilliant.

Derpy Dom

#8 · 24w, 3d ago ·

Great little short story. I can only assume that this piece hits home for a few of my fellow authors as well

wackedoutpet

#9 · 24w, 2d ago ·

You just won everything, good job

Featherprop

#10 · 24w, 2d ago ·

Short, sweet, an enjoyable read!

"Sparse" is the first description that comes to mind for this- you've laid out the bare bones of a story and presented it with minimal dressing. It works quite well, but left me wanting more- in places it seems to hustle along, when it could have stopped and dallied and really tugged on the heartstrings. Several commenters have mentioned that the transitions are almost too fast, but I think that would be solved if there were more meat to the story- I see it as a bit of memoir, so it being episodic an only hitting a few points works.

Honestly? Stories that proceed like this one are the reason I like this fandom- things are SUPPOSED to work out in Equestria, so it's not jarring or boring when they do. Real life has enough disappointment, pain, betrayal, and losing, so to see something like this is refreshing.

Very nice!

DUBMAR3000

#11 · 9w, 6d ago ·

:heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: it's amazing :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart:

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