• Member Since 30th Nov, 2012
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Heya. I have long hair. I'm studying to be a nurse.

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In this story, our character, Witch Circle, is an odd one. he shows up out of no where in the middle of the night bandaged and shy. What happened to him? What will happen to him? He'll fall in love with somepony. And he'll find out who he is and where he fits in. But who how and why? Well. We'll just have to see.

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Comments ( 18 )

Are you fucking kidding me?

1711937
i kinda agree with that..

1711967
*steals your sweetroll* :pinkiecrazy:

Spoiler alert.

Pony meets the mane 6. Pony gets a dark background story where nobody understands him. Something bad happens. Only OC pony can save them.

Pony falls in love with other pony. Some love pony triangle goes on. Pony and first love interest pony get together.

OC pony saves them.

Pony gets his own picture on a glass window and recognized the greatest stallion ever.

The end.

There you guys I just saved you a good few hours of reading. You're welcome :rainbowdetermined2:

1711971
Oh no you didn't! Get erected!

1712139
*crouches to shadow stealth*

1712180
Now, I know who you are. And... and I know your business... Just, please... These are good folk we got here. Mostly

1712042

"good few hours of reading"....

What...? It's 1k words, how can that possi-

1712214 The story says "incomplete" I was just guessing an estimate amount of chapters.

1712224

Yeah, I was hoping you were thinking something along those lines...

1712210
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:coolphoto: Guten Morgen, fellow.. writer? :coolphoto:

Judging by the fact that you registered less than a day ago, I'm going to guess that you're either a troll or a newbie.
This story has so many convention errors it would make Goebbels not only turn in his grave, but come back from the dead. The plot isn't very good, either, but it would be somewhat better if I could understand it.

If you're serious about writing stories and not just a troll, I would suggest reading some other fan-fiction before making your own. I would also suggest taking a basic English class. :twilightsmile:

Oh, and delete this story. Nothing good will come of it.

:coolphoto: Auf Wiedersehen! :coolphoto:
-Temperance, the Guileless Philosopher

Heya. People that gave me feedback, Thanks for the feedback. I'll keep working. Apologies all around for the grammer. I'm new to writing stories. And obviously not too good at it. Hahaha.

1712042
Few hours? Psh, maybe 5 minutes.

1712042
So, essentially self-insert wish fulfillment that has nothing but a name and variances in the "plot", if such it can be called, to set it apart from others in the previously mentioned category? Screw this, then. :derpytongue2:

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