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Alright I finished reading it and frankly I liked it, but why does it have negatives already. It's quite good.

*imitates Bill Cosby*
There's this thing with the likes and the dislikes
and you put them in a bowl and stir them with the jello pudding!
It'll be like the New Coke, it'll be around forever!
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1684401 In the pines, brah.
In the pines.
Where th sun don't ever shine.

Not bad. Short, sweet, and to the point. Don't see why it got so many dislikes already.

I upvote thee take that downvoters! And with that I say adeu

King Lazaro Sol of ziolia

WHY ALL THE DISLIKES PEOPLE? :applejackunsure:

I enjoyed it. Well done.

Doesn't deserve the 9 dislikes it already has. :duck:

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In general, I hate the rating system because they tell me nothing about what's wrong and what's right. I don't mind people criticizing my work, but I want to at least know why they didn't like my work. A score tells me nothing. As for why people don't like it, I can only speculate. My guess is that they don't like clopfics, in which case why are they reading the story anyway? :trixieshiftleft:

1687128 people just dont use logic sometimes :derpytongue2:

1687128 Well, I liked it, but I wish it was a little more descriptive. Try going into more detail than "He started", don't be afraid to use more dirty words (this is mature after all). That might be why some people down voted. Well regardless, it's very well written, and the characters and situation were believable. I foresee a great future for you, and I know a clairvoyant dragon :raritywink:

Max

I think it's because is fancy pants and not spike... :rainbowlaugh:

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Okay, I won't deny you have a point. The reason why my clopfics are written the way they are is not because I'm squeamish about it. It’s just that I like to put my stories on FanFiction as well, and the thing about FanFiction is that it’s quite strict about its censorship regulations to the point that its rules clearly states that explicit and graphically detailed sexual contact is forbidden. Not wanting my stories to be deleted from the site again, I follow their regulations closely, and I post my fanfics unedited on FIMFiction as well.

Now, before anyone chides me for this, yes I know that there have been graphic sex stories on FanFiction, however, just because some people are lucky enough to get away with it doesn’t mean I can. FanFiction does enforce its own rules and I have had stories taken down because I broke the rules.

I have often thought about posting more graphic versions of my clopfics on FIMFiction, but I have avoided it simply because I was worried that FIMFiction would be just as strict as FanFiction. Still, considering the mature stories I’ve read in on this site recently, it does seem like my fears were unfounded. Maybe I will put some thought into rewriting this story and my other clopfics.

1694833 Well, I'm definitely looking forward to future stories. You're right about some of the stories here, they can be *shudders* graphic. Just curious though, do just do clop, or do you do other genres, too? I'll be watching.

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Slash fiction was something I only started writing recently. If you read my stories on my FIMFiction account and on my FanFiction account, you can see that I’ve written stories in several genres, mostly fantasy and adventure stories, but occasionally I would write comedies, horror stories, dramas, and slice of life stories.

This is as close as I'm going to get to romance for my OTP, so I won't complain even though I'm normally not a clopfic person. I got a pretty good laugh out of this part, though:

Fancy Pants gave her a cheerful smile. “Then will you be interested in spending the night in my bed.”
Rarity nearly choked on the cider. Once her loud coughing fit ended, she stared at him in stunned silence by his bold request. “I’m sorry, I didn’t hear you. I could’ve sworn that you wanted me to spend the night in bed with you.”
“That’s exactly what I said.”

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:spikedespair NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!! lol

This is now my favorite pony to ship with Rarity. :pinkiehappy:

I wouldn't think of Fancy being this forward, he's too much of a gentlecolt for that. Also that he seems the type to actually do foreplay before getting to business.

But hey, it is what it is. Which is good clop. :rainbowwild:

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