The mane six and Celestia have have gone to the human world for a camping trip...and Rainbow Dash cannot stand it.
One night, being unable to sleep, she wanders into the forest and gets a brilliant idea. Explore the human world! That would definitely be more fun than being stuck on this camping trip.
So, with Twilight's help, she disguises herself as a normal human girl and travels to New York City where she meets Jacklynn, a quirky, adventurous girl who takes her for a wild ride.
But, Rainbow is frequently reminded, by her element of loyalty, about her friends back at the campsite, and becomes unsure about her choice to leave them.
Meanwhile, Twilight is dealing with keeping Rainbow's secret, and not doing very well.
Can Rainbow shove past her insecurities and enjoy her stay? Or will she wuss out and go home? Will the others find out?
Why are you asking me? Read the story!
(Note: there is some light shipping in this story.)
(Extra note: The cover was made using a base. Base credit goes to shadowblackcat1000 on Deviant Art.)
Spacing. Use it. Makes it sort of hard to read. )_)
But other than that, this is a really cool idea, and a nice change of pace from all the human in Equestria and Grimdarks.
Just needs a bit of work is all.
I agree with the spacing, but the way we get to see inside Rainbow's head more than makes up for it.
Tracking. Don't make me regret this decision.
I'm not into human crossover but well done!
I am loving this! Tracking.
... Lost me at pinkie x dash shipping. Couldn't she go Other places in ny? Like long island?
136641 Thanks for the idea, I'll keep that in mind ;)
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Spacing as in how? What's wrong with the spacing?
I think this story is dead...
R.I.P
Awesome story