Twilight never became an alicorn princess and instead lost her life as a result of Star-Swirl the Bearded's unpredictable spell. But being dead doesn't prevent Twilight from visiting those she cares for...
When a time traveling spell goes horribly wrong, the sons and daughters of the Mane Six are thrown back to when their mothers were still single. Now their very existence is at risk as they try to return home without changing history itself.
Had Pinkie survived, I'd have actually given this a favorite. As-is, it still leans a bit too towards depressing for my tastes. I'll upvote it, though.
Definitely cried at the end.
In the end Pinky died anyway...at least I'm glad Rainbow Dash was able to be herself again.
:raritycry
lol this was hilarious, especially at the end, i laughed so hard.
anyway great story. you have a talent with writing, well done.
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A sequel to Rocket to Insanity? Wow. Very well written, though I wish it would have ended happier.
oh FUCK YOU DASH
:,(
mis you
it made me cry :(
Very good but I'd be lying if I said I didn't cry a little
that was really good but siiiigh
i just thought os something,how is this here yet the original rocket to insanity dosnt seem to be on this site at all?
least i cant find it
RAINBOW DASH IS AN ASSHOLE
23638 indeed
awwwwwwww..... pinkie pie is my fave character . wish she coulda lived...liked the other version better...
oh cool man yeay!!!!! yeahye oooooooooooooooooooooooohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!! from regular shooooowww yay!!! trust me
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Bitch, don't be hating on Dash.
Sure I and miss pinkie too but the past is the past, and you can't change it.
Also dash is the best anyway so Fuk u, Fuk u, and Fuk u!!!!!!
yeah if pinkie died i would bee sooo sad !!!
This sniff was great really sniff sniff but pinkie pie...
i didn't read it but i bet it sucked
Good sequel. But something felt like it was missing... Can't say what.
:O
Applejack.....
sniffling... technically not crying......................... Damn you! I hate crying!
Dear author
I don't love you anymore
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
murder time
all the sudden fluttershy runs in .... FUS RO YAY!!!!!!!!!!!! and paralyzes dash so she doesnt kill anyone else happy ending...
well that was a well written story and i enjoyed it very much good sir.
This story is cripplingly sad. I can't even function right now
redemption
anger
sorrow
regret
Had Pinkie survived, I'd have actually given this a favorite.
As-is, it still leans a bit too towards depressing for my tastes.
I'll upvote it, though.