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Godric The Radical


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This is the story... *recording stops* yeah yeah yeah we have heard that thing over and over again. This story is about you guy's stories if you send me your stories they may be published into a story. There is a could rules to this though.
Rule 1 It has to be a short story no long ones roughly 1000-3000 words
Rule 2 I can do romance but no clop fics pertaining to what it is
Rule 3 PM only I do not check my comments every day.
Rule 4 any character is acceptable including OCs and other characters
Rule 5 you have to be patience
Rule 6 Be imaginative the sky is the limit

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Comments ( 6 )

I don't get it? If people have their own stories, why wouldn't they just publish them themselves?

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well sometimes people have an idea but they do not want to write it

... Way to much telling. Not enough show.

Show, don't tell.

~Axel Nyan, One of TWE's many Official Reviewers/Contributors/Moderators, Resident Stalker, Friendly Proof-reader/Editor, Neutral Brony, Impetuous and Silly Tentacruel, D'aww Creater, and Enthusiastic Mexican't.

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I am sorry but that is how I write because I was always told to tell not show even since I was a little kid that way has been hardwired into my brain

1596339 Since I was a kid, I was told to tell, not show, as well. My "teacher" would give us "F"'s if we had more than 2 sentences of anything that isn't dialogue.
AXEL NYAN: It got to where I'd start writing in script format all the time. Up until about 2 years ago. Then I saw some of the writing on FFnet. I wrote some shit there. All of it in script format. And I got BERATED for it.

However, I learned. I learned that what I was doing really did not please anyone much. I learned that showing worked even better than telling. I think, if I could learn under those conditions, since I was raised from pre-k to write like that, that you can learn too. Again, as I said in that PM, you are a Red. Take the advice given to Reds and seek the damn advice. Apply it to yourself.

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I have been trying to appiling it to my life for sometime now. Please do not mention FFnet because that just stirrers up very old problems I have been sad a heck because of it so please do not mention their name it is a place where my life changed for the worse because of them.

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