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GeodesicDragon
I am a Scotsman who writes stories, not all of which are of the self-insert variety. Books are available again; check my userpage for details.
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Yeah... I doubt I'll be writing one of these again.
Please, be as honestly brutal as you want. It is painfully obvious (to all of us) that writing clopfics is clearly not my forté.
I, er... I think I'll stick to writing my cheesy romance stories and comedy one-shots, thank you very much.
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Thank you
but we (the readers) need it so we can move foward and not imagine ourself the FF
since its yours and only the writter knows what happens and what will happens
Keep the good job!
Sorry, I couldn't resist.
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Bow chicka bow-wow.
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Another pony-human clopfic ?
Is it original in some way at least ?
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You did well. Description is always good, and the action is well written.
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It's part of a larger story, one without clop. I encourage you to read it.
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all clopfics are the same - "discover of your true sexuality (mainly f/f clopfics)", then "Love", and in the end - fucking (order may be varied).
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All generalizations are wrong.
On a more serious note, you shouldn't judge a book by it's cover. Give this author a chance, and he may surprise you.
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Hopefully an admin doesn't see that huge ass picture.
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What huge ass picture?
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Well, I can't please everyone... not that I was even trying to, of course.
But 1594398 is right, you shouldn't judge.
This is my first, last and only clopfic.Read my other stuff, you might like it. Then again, you might not. I can't rightly say.EDIT (Feb 3rd 2014): 'First, last and only clopfic'? Not any more, it isn't!
not half bad for a first timer
see what i did there
1600009 lol
Not bad, Geo, but I agree that it is very clearly not your forte
Dialogue is mediocre, actions aren't very well-described, and in general it's just ok for what it does and isn't very interesting
Done
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... Just kidding.
Thanks for being honest.
Da fuq did i just read.
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Funny, I was thinking the same thing after I finished writing it.
1706482 I didnt even know what you peoples ment by "clopfic" my image of her is forever ruined.
Yup. That was... Huh. Have a Schnauzer for your first and last try at writing clop.
sums it up perfectly.
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Why dafuq did I read this in my high school class?
Ha I like the fact that this has more comments than the original. Guess people were like "oooh clop" click
Haha. Fail!
It was pretty nice.
woah. was reading the rewrite and realized I had completely forgotten to like and favorite this. woops.
followin'
Pretty good, but you need more detail and better pacing.
Hmmm, kicking the door open......and then giving a massage. Pretty sweet so fa......wait what? She took your trousers off?
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Yeah, this was my first attempt at clop. I like to think my second one, Making Amends has more detail and better pacing... even if it's upvote/downvote ratio is worse than this story's.
2419240 I gotta say man. I've read a few clopfics in my day,(literally; before this it was three) but none of them made my heart skip so much. Congratulations: you've successfully given me heart disease.
In all seriousness, though, I liked it (though the other three were by TAB, or whatever the name is; so maybe those are just terrible and I don't know it.)
"I could have done better." best line ever.
Geo, this was really good! truth be told this fanfic of yours led me to this site! Your writing style is really good and the story really shows how much you loved making this. After I finish this I know I'm gonna read a lot more of your work.
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Why thank you!
This particular story was my first attempt at writing clop, and I know I could have done better. But I enjoy what I do, and comments like yours encourage me to keep doing it.
Great chapter, now time for me finsh reading the rest of the story.
I had to think of THIS:
The moment it started... It's not bad I must say, but each time I record a clop, I feel strange, when mimicing the female parts xD
um how bout spike?
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What about him?
3890101 did he hear anything? the moans, the thumping?
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Damn, I never thought of that.
I guess that this is yet another plothole I need to fill in the rewrite of the main story.
2670890 I think the name you're looking for is TAW
2416397 She didn't just take them off, she MAGICKED them off.
I have the weirdest boner right now and why did I even imagine it...
but it was hot
Glad you fixed this.
The old one just had him in his pants, no underwear. 
hmmm... I was wondering why this part has so little views in main line
now what to say to say things right....
well, first of all I don't mind clop at all.
I was a furry for years, before I became a Brony, so I got used to sexual themes in time, but truth is that my interest in furry began to dwindle over the yeas, when I've realized that basicly EVERYTHING there revolves around porn. That is probably the reason why I gave chance to Bronies in the first place and their creativity OUTSIDE porn surprised me over and over. Somehow I feel here even better and more active than I ever was in furry.
I was never much active in furry, wrote a few pieces, with many more in my computer that were never uploaded but what drove me to furry were feeling that I finally belong somewhere, until I've realized that except few people it was all about sex...and what worse...generic sex
got a few good friends there, but all of them could do amazing clean and romantic works if they wanted, had amazing stories, great characters and variable personalities. For them, same as for me, sex and erotica were only part of the circle, so I usually disregarded anything that didn't belonged to greater picture - never looked for porn just for the sake of porn
as such I have no problem with this.
it was based around feelings, and that raises the value for me (because I'm deeply romantic person)
how realistic it is is different thing ( if you can talk about realicism in this case at all :-) )
anyway, personally I don't see reason to avoid sexual content if it compliments the greater picture of story or series itself
I can see Twilight's letter now.
"Dear Princess Celestia,
Today I just lost my virginity to the human!
It was GREAT!! You should try it sometimes..."
Great and pleasant details.
I wish that was me. Lucky guy getting that good Lavender Book Ponussy. Well I guess he just entered the Twilight Zone hehe ^^