You are a gentleman and a scholar.
I praise you for your intelligence, and say again: If you make this explicit, you will get over 10000 views in ten seconds flat.

Keep it up.

Ooohhhh my god this is AWESOME. It just keeps getting better. The wingboner totally got me, can't help grinning. And Twilight as a masochist... totally can see that.

Keep it up, you got yourself an audience here. :)

Liked the first one, but this was great! i was a little disconcerted with how Twilight was treated but i think that its probably a good thing anyway. She does kinda need to be more respectful to the others. Then the ending with Rainbow Dash? AWWW HEELLLL YAAAA!!! The next one is gunna be fun...

113604 I second the above comment . . .

Since the theme is flutters being more assertive, I figure I'll try. "Take that shit of hiatus and give me more chapters damnit!"

Buck yeah!

Moar?

If you dont mind me saying so, I beleive that you could improve on this, and it needs very little improvement, by changes the tense to either past or present rather than future. It seems somewhat unnatural to me, although it does make your story stand out more.

You are a god among meer mortals

This is bloody brilliant. I actually enjoy reading this, and I'm not a big fan of clopfics. Hope the next chapter comes soon!

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Because freedom of speech.

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113899 Because ponies.

Amazingly simple, yet addictive. Great work.

Ahhh poor Rainbow Dash, She just dosen't know what she's got herself into now.

Keep writing man!

I didn't really like this... At all... Sorry.

Oh, Rainbow Dash was so very predictable (peeping tomgirl, WING ERECTION) but that doesn't make it any less sweet. My absolute favorite still being

Fluttershy can hardly believe what she's seeing. "Rarity!" she gasps, "W-w-what are you planning to
do with that?"
Despite her anxiety, Twilight can't resist an amused scoff. "Yeah, it's a real mystery ..."
“Twilight!” Rarity looks at her with obvious disapproval. With a huff, she lightly flicks the cane
against the little ruffles at the tops of Twilight's stockings, “My, my, we definitely have to do something about
this ... sarcasm."

That really made my day. I only hope the lessons will help them grow, and not downright change them, because that would be sad. Twilight without sarcasm? No way.

Thanks again for a session of wonderful s&m randomness. Didn't think you could do it again, but guess what? you did

oh my.

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Rarity: The Monster of Ponyville. No one is perfect enough for her. They have so many "flaws" like wills, assertiveness and personalities. Better to destroy all that lives than bear the uncontrolled.

Poor Rarity. She gets no respect. She's either an insane artist or mistress of madness. Some ponies never catch a break.

113664 I KNOW. WHAT THE FUCK. WRITE MOAR GAWD DAMNIT!!!!! WRITE LIKE YOUR LIFE DEPENDS ON IT!

115077 Check out the ask lil miss rarity and sadistic rarity tumblr blogs. its this but with pictures!

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http://ask-sadistic-rarity.tumblr.com/

sadi rarity is better for this story i believe...

every time i read a part about spanking some animal made a sound kinda like a scream MAKE IT EXPLICIT please

It made me feel bad when Twilight was crying. :( I don't want to see her degraded. Otherwise, kinda kinky :).

An... interesting take on the concept of 'learning'. I do like the way you're trying to keep it 'sensual' without going to far into 'sexual'. (Although the 'magic' joke at the end there was a bit amusing.)

As for all the people encouraging you to make this a clopfic (Seriously, where did that term come from?), I ask that you only write what *you* want to write. Fiction almost always comes out better when the writer is satisfied with their work than when they are pressured into writing something they don't want to.

As well, consider this watched and starred.

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THE ORIGINS OF THE TERM "CLOPFIC"

Fap: The sound of masturbation. As in, fapfapfapfap. "Fapping" came to be used as a term for the act of masturbation itself.

Fapfic: An erotic fic that people masturbate to.

Clop: The sound of pony masturbation; the MLP version of fap. As in, the sound of hooves clopping, and I'm sure you can imagine why. "Clopping" came to be used as a term in the brony community for the act of masturbating to MLP Rule 34.

Therefore...

Clopfic: A pony fic that people masturbate to.

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Well. Thanks for the info. I guess I'm just a bit too old school since I still use the term 'Lemon' for that sort of thing in prose format.

>> Niteflier

Though, Lemon and Lime are still the best terms on the web! This would be Lime, where your standard clopfic would be Lemon... or was that the other way around, I'm not sure quite frankly... anyhow, why leave the perfectly functional originals behind?

Take off hiatus soon?

I do say this is quite good. Ive before this never read a fic with I guess this is BDSM I dont really remember what it was called. The wingboner definitely caught me by surprise. As everyone else states this would be great as explicit.

NO NOT ON HIATUS!

i'm not gonna lie. this story makes me physically sick to my stomach.
Sorry but this just ain't my scene. sad thing is I might read the next chapter when/ if it comes out(hopefully not though) just to see if twi can smack the shit outta everyone else.
twi: oh rarity that hurt? prolly should of thought of that before tying yourself up dumbass *magical bitch slap*

um i have only a couple things t say WTF did you have to do that with twilight for? and what the fuck did i just read , i mean wow..really wow.

absolutely brilliant. nice to see a bdsm fic where flutters is giving it for a change rather than being a sub

WELL DONE

Amazing chapter!!! TwiSub is so good

Any chance of this chapter being fixed to remove all the extraneous line breaks?