Very, very sweet. Loved every word of it. Make an explicit version if you're pressured into it, but I like this as it is. It alos fits perfectly with Rarity's personality (all neat freaks have a "dark", chaotic side)
Oh...Oh my....It would ACTUALLY make sense if this ever happened. Rarity doesn't normally mind some more....lewd contact in the show and seems perverse overall.
I'll track this and give this close to 5 stars. Keep it up
To be honest, I always thought that Fluttershy was secretly some kind of bondage goddess. The problem is working up enough courage to get anypony into her bed. Or, basement.
Very well done, character-appropriate, and intricately written. I must say, I enjoyed this one. It's right there among "the Back Room" when it comes to well-written perverted fics.
113307 No, silly, you misspelled Twilight. But by all the various gods, Rarity's so hot in this. I especially like the thought of Fluttershy slowly maturing into this beautiful, powerful domme.
I am actually going to track this because A) You play the character beautifully B) This is deliciously awkward through the whole thing and it just makes me laugh
In this case I apologize. Though it is, despite it's pretty much sexless nature, very clopable. Especially to the utterly depraved and fetishistic audience ;)
Haven't read the story, just want to determine: Is this the same "Rarity's Assertiveness Training Course" mentioned here? I'm somewhat confused, since that would mean it was already pretty old when it was posted here, despite the chapters being posted on different dates; and the description of Holding the Reins doesn't seem to match this.
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Make it explicit and you will get over 9000 internets.
Very, very sweet. Loved every word of it. Make an explicit version if you're pressured into it, but I like this as it is. It alos fits perfectly with Rarity's personality (all neat freaks have a "dark", chaotic side)
110688 I agree with this fine gentlemen.
Oh my god. YES. I finally found this again!
Thank you sweet gods!
Oh...Oh my....It would ACTUALLY make sense if this ever happened. Rarity doesn't normally mind some more....lewd contact in the show and seems perverse overall.
I'll track this and give this close to 5 stars. Keep it up
Not bad. Looking forward to the rest, explicit action or not.
110688 ur doin it wrong.
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THIS, is how you do it.
110688 I SECOND THIS
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To be honest, I always thought that Fluttershy was secretly some kind of bondage goddess. The problem is working up enough courage to get anypony into her bed. Or, basement.
Oh look, it's another of "those" stories.
Moving on...
112979 TO THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!! WOOT MOAR!
i was reading this while i was playing skyrim
my character fell down a waterfall and landed next to a dead dragon and absorbed it's soul
i swear to god this story scared the everloving shit out of me
Oh yeah, I remember this. Nice to see it here!
Mildly insane clopfiction. My favourite kind!
Very well done, character-appropriate, and intricately written. I must say, I enjoyed this one. It's right there among "the Back Room" when it comes to well-written perverted fics.
Tracking.
Fluttershy, you're putting me in a bind!
113197
Ep ep ep - not clopfiction.
Sensual fiction? Definitely.
Fetish fiction? ... admittedly yes.
But not clopfiction. Just for the record.
113209
See
110688
Do it. Hundreds are waiting for it.
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i think i have found a new favorite story
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113307
No, silly, you misspelled Twilight. But by all the various gods, Rarity's so hot in this. I especially like the thought of Fluttershy slowly maturing into this beautiful, powerful domme.
Kinda like a chrysalis that becomes a butterfly.
...
Waaaaaaaaait a minute...
113329 :rainbow laugh: Bahahahahahaha! i see the connection! BAHAHAHAHAHA!
I am actually going to track this because A) You play the character beautifully B) This is deliciously awkward through the whole thing and it just makes me laugh
113209
In this case I apologize. Though it is, despite it's pretty much sexless nature, very clopable. Especially to the utterly depraved and fetishistic audience ;)
Congrats Mr.V
110882 You need to do it right.
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Pony Gusta.
Rarity is ordering Fluttershy to order Rarity.
Okay.
115494 That sir, it the definition of shit getting real.
finally some hoof action,i like that
This day is awesome. I found 3 legit BDSM Pony fics and I didn't think there even were any!
...Oddl,y they all starred rarity, first as a sub, then a dom, then what seems to be a switch...
I really hope this goes on for a while
614483 same here
Haven't read the story, just want to determine: Is this the same "Rarity's Assertiveness Training Course" mentioned here? I'm somewhat confused, since that would mean it was already pretty old when it was posted here, despite the chapters being posted on different dates; and the description of Holding the Reins doesn't seem to match this.
Edit: Apparently it's not.