• Published 7th Nov 2012
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Revelations Of Harmony - Doctorparadox13



A young, weary traveler was murdered. His body is mysteriously teleported into Equestria, and he is

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Short announcement

Yeah, I'm not exactly going to redo the entire first chapter, just the part when he enters Equestria. Waking up in a hospital, it seemed like a good idea at the time but I sorta want to take a different approach of it. Instead of waking up in a hospital and immediately meeting the mane 6 I want him to try force himself to stay hidden, steal, all that stuff out of fear what ponies will think of him. That idea came to when I read ''Rorschach in Equestria'' So yeah, the first chapter has to be partially redone and the second chapter delayed. Besides, I've been really wrapped up in Halo 4 so editing the first chapter might take a while.