Nov
11th
2012
Redoing ''Revalations'' · 5:17am Nov 11th, 2012
Yeah, I'm not exactly going to redo the entire first chapter, just the part when he enters Equestria. Waking up in a hospital, it seemed like a good idea at the time but I sorta want to take a different approach of it. Instead of waking up in a hospital and immediately meeting the mane 6 I want him to try force himself to stay hidden, steal, all that stuff out of fear what ponies will think of him. That idea came to when I read ''Rorschach in Equestria'' So yeah, the first chapter has to be
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140 weeks and no sign about him/her
I decler this user death
188465 Apologizing to anonauthor? ''I'm proud of you, DoctorParadox.
I think you know why''
These sort of comments make me highly suspicious, then again I'm a really paranoid person.
I doubt it means much to you, coming from a complete stranger and all, but I'm proud of you, DoctorParadox.
I think you know why.
Whens the next chapter of ''Revelations'' coming out man? Also I think you should have made your character addicted to doobies man.
Hello again! Thank you so much for the Fave of The Silent Shore, and especially for the Watch! I promise to keep trying to deserve it!