i'll give it
one derpy
two fluttershy's
and happy pinkie

Is that good? I hope that's good. It sounds good... but if it's out of a dozen happy pinkies, that's not so impressive. Unless only the real Pinkie liked it.

I'll admit I had to force myself to read this but now i m happy that im reading this

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Why did you have to force yourself? Clearly you liked the end result... I'd like to break down the walls for people.

Good one, a good one indeed. Quite chaste - no 'leapuptotheaction', interesting ending. Great job.

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I like to think that I'm actually writing a story, it just happens to be about sex.

That's what I like to think.

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I think that's the best summary. These are all quite good.