I loved the ending.

No. No. Just no.

estimulate her brain and ejaculate an idea.

YES

OH DEAR JESUS IN A CRACKPIPE YES

AFTER READING:

I jizzed all over my waffles.

1510334
I hope you didn't eat them anyway...

1511675 WELL I WASN'T GOING TO WASTE PERFECTLY GOOD WAFFLES, NOW WAS I?

1511694
Can't argue with that.

1511774 FLAWLESS LOGIC

1511845
AND CANTERLOCK FOR THE WIN!

1511867EEYUP

1510334
get more waffles ready, i'm writiing the second part

1512425 NO WAFFLE WILL GO UNJIZZED

1512432 my reaction after reading this comment train:

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1514749
Nope.

i can admit it the ending had me laughing till tears rolled in my eyes. Having to admit that in front of so many ponies is embarrassing enough, but having some of them seem apathetic to it really... just..... BWAHAHAHAH

It says you updated recently. What exactly did you do?

1541547
add some scenes, fix some errors, cut crap, general stuff, proofreaded by an anonymous, final cut.

1545004
Okay, I'll do reread and see if I like it more or less. Oh and, glad to see your back on. If it isn't too much to ask, could you read one of my clops? It's called "Nightmare Night story" if you do.

1512432
Quote of the year. Congrats.

5425466 year 2012, maybe

5425993 Nah, it makes QOTY 2014 too. You should feel special winning it for three years in a row now

5426040 nice

5426550 5426040
Don't worry, I'm in the makings of a second part so regy can win QOTY 3 more years in a row.

5434779
Wait, a second part? How will you continue from here?
Whelp. guess I gotta watch you now

5435004
Of course with Twilight's friends actually helping her this time.

5435776
oooooooh
Friendship is Magic™

5434779 Woah woah woah
that's a lot of pressure m8

1545004
You missed one error:- “My Friend Rarity visited me after a couple of hours in which I was trying to horn marturbating me"

It should be "I was trying to horn masturbate myself (to get an idea/to make a new spell)" or "I was trying to masturbate my horn to orgasm (to get an idea/to make a new spell)"

“My Friend Rarity visited me after a couple of hours in which I was trying to horn marturbating me, but I had failed miserably and she told me that the proper way in which a lady does it, is with a fleshlight based in her own marehood. So I thought, why a fleshlight? I could create a spell to use `your’ own marehood without trouble.”

Guess you lost your chance at both Rarity and Twilight Sparkle Spike. Too bad.

1522376
Same. The whole story/chapter was amazing, but that ending was the bonus cherry on top of a great story. Looking forward to the continuation.