Pinkie gets a cavity and needs to get it fixed. However she is reluctant to get it treated and needs the support of a friend. Can Twilight help Pinkie get over her dentophobia? This cavity is driving Pinkie even more bonkers than before! This was meant to feel like an episodic story.
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They should make this into an episode. I would totally watch it. Also, FIRST!
It's a really nice little piece. As has been mentioned, it would work as the kind of show FiM actually is, as opposed to most stories we tell based on it on this website.
The only thing I don't really like is that it could have dealt a little more with Pinkie actually going to her appointment, and contrast that with what she imagined would happen in there. It would have worked well if we do see this as the script for a show for little children, since they are often genuinely worried about the dentist. ( I was!
) But that's all.
1503796 To be honest this isn't the first time someone has written a fanfic where Pinkie Pie goes to the dentist but this one has to be the best one I've read, as for the other ones, one of them involved the dentists trying to scare Pinkie Pie on purpose which doesn't work, and the other was a pun based fic.
Also I think I'd throw in a plot twist by making it so that Twilight is told SHE has to go the dentist as well and when Pinkie Pie confrots her about it Twilight blushes and run offs with Pinkie Pie shrugging before Spike points that Twilight thinks she can take care of her teeth herself and he and Pinkie Pie start laughing as the episode ends.
The dental clinic is Pinkie's personal hell...
HERE, PINKIE! *gives her all of my spiced wafers* EAT 'EM UP, YOU CRAZED PONY!
In other words, I loved this. They should so make this an episode; it would be sooo epic 
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I understand Pinkie here, the dentist is a mildly painful yet necessary place.
Unless you're totally high on laughing gas and just don't give a crap.
I'll read later.
Pinkie should have watched this first. It worked for me.
Easily could be a good episode. Great read. Thumbs up
I added this to a group of mine. One for fics that would make good episodes or movies.
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Thanks! I plan on writing more 'episodes'!
This was very good! It's true what they say up there, this could be adapted to an actual episode of the show.
Good job!
That was very cute. I don't understand why this idea has crossed the minds of the writers. Season 4, maybe?
Huh. I'm writing a fanfic with Pinkie and Twilight too. Going to the dentist and twilight is the supporter. STOP READING MY MIND!!!!!!!!!!!
I wanted pinkie to get loopy gas!
why couldn't she of gotten loopy gas?!
3730133 i dont think it would have effected Pinkie much since she is sorta loopy from before