Adam (Human) : "Are you sure I can tell them? It could ruin the story."
Adam (Pony) : "At some point, you're going to have to tell them this at least." *He taps his horn lightly*
Twilight: "Might I be so bold as to ask why you chose magic over the ability to fly or to be strong?" *She looks concerned, slightly highlighting her worries*
Adam (H) : "He chose magic because he wanted to become closer with you, miss Sparkle, those were his motives." *He glances at his pony counterpart*
Adam (P) : "True, but I ALSO chose magic because I can retain my knowledge whilst sacrificing all my strength, speed and agility. Nothing really major upon my part, assuming there are libraries full of books I can study on the subject of Equestrian magic."
Twilight : "Well yes, but we don't have many modification spells as such, they are normally rare to find, the one I put on Rarity to make her wings of gossamer and morning dew was hard enough to perform. However, I feel that we might not strike so lucky with other modification spells." *She looks at Adam's pony counterpart sympathetically*
Adam (H) : "Well, my amulets destroyed, so I'm now a normal human, I can die and take damage, but now that I am not wearing the amulet, it meas that any harm that comes of me shouldn't affect any of my selves." *He smiles*

???: Perhaps that's where I step in....

I'm not even no no I'm no

NOPE NOPE no!
Nopety no!

Screw you all, I'm OUT!

1557637 Makes Killjoy impersonation while taking a cheap-ass way out of Gary-Stu land?

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Fuck this, I'm out.

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I honestly think you should keep writing. Please! If you like to make stories, do with or without the 'help' of some of these haters! If they won't tell you what you did wrong, then let them be Balloon Boys!
I'll root ya on no matter what!